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nice. This has potential to develop further into something greater. You could go on to saying what causes you to have empty smiles elaborate a little to for dramatic monologue or something.But still nice liking it. keep up the work.
ok. This is a poem of five lines...a quintet...nicely done. It simple and very meaningful. A lot has been said in those five lines. It could be the signature statement for a picture or advert. Kudos!
Short, sweet, and to the point. Well done! I liked how you compared friends to a coat becausr a good friend would guard you from bad things. Similar to the weather... but anywho I liked that point. I also liked the rhyme scheme, that was fun too. All in all, good work!
I like it! It's so short...yet so powerful. Nice rhyming, too.