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okay, first things first, i like the damn cliffhanger. like c'mon, it's Garret? this is definitely something I am going to read for as long as you update, lol. Reminds ...

Hi, after reading the entirety of this chapter, I feel I could read the next part too, there's something definitely going on. Alas, I have stumbled onto this halfway and ...

Hey, pages here. I love ghost stories, i must say though this was a little less than i expected. The chapters were rushed and literally not detailed at all. The ...

hi....pages here :) nice piece you've got here, i like magic and paranormal staff, to mix with the tech. i find you should try developing your paragraphs a little more, ...

Hi.... The pages here . Lovely poem, couldn't help but smile at the following verse as it almost points to me....nice "I am one of the confident ones Though sometimes ...

Wow, this is a really strange world, way past the ordinary. But then again that's what makes it a great unique piece. I've had some trouble piecing up the scenes ...

Hello, i like this poem. Nice rythm and the story is a nice one. Only that I am confused alittle in the mid of it all. It seems like there ...

Hello, an interesting presentation you've got here. The poems are touching but humorous at the same time, i like the one of not making wishes on birthday cake candles. Mostly ...

Hello, am getting fond of ths story now, ths chapter fits in with the prologue quite well. I like Elena, really strong spirit there reminds me of Agnes n her ...

Hey, nice story here, rich story line. The only adjustment u could do is in the first paragraph "the ceiling above her was damaged from(i think this could best be ...

Yo, nice poem you've got here, makes one reconsider the sole purpose of religion; is it a way of dividing people or one to bring them together. The creator is ...

Hi, ths is a nice piece. I relate to the lines but the formating kinda makes it hard. Don't know if it's my mobile having it wrong. Other than that ...

Hello, nice reflection of yourself here, i like. For one to know the value of their existance, they must be at good terms with the fact that they do exist; ...

Yo, hello, intriguing tittle you've got here. Death, since the days of ancient civilization has been a mystery whose solution is known only to the creator. Many times i thnk ...

Hello, long time since i last read your work, i've got some catchin up to do. I like this chapter, from the prologue, the rythm of the sentences and the ...