theobliviousoracle

Hello. Getting on with the review, I liked the concept and the theme of the poem. I liked the idea that's behind the scene, making it all work, but what's ...

Hello. Okay for the review, this was not what I expected, I expected a real poem. First of all when you tell me to think of a tree as a ...

Okay, how did you write a poem about me!? Ha ha just kidding but it felt as if that was me. Totally know that feeling. Now for the review part, ...

First of all, Welcome to YWS! :D It's not daily that I see fellow Indian names here so this is a warm welcome. *you feel warm* Now let's get on ...

Well, for the review I guess I'm a little late but I noticed this I'm your list of works as I was reading your poem so let's see it now. ...

it was a particularly peculiar poem i think as you don't usually get to read ones like this. i felt the completeness the fulfillment after reading this and it left ...

When i see it the first thing that bothers me is the irregularity in the width of the lines so that's the first thing I'll tell you to look at. ...

First of all, your very first two lines made lesser impact on me than your description and the title. I went on expecting that it is going to get good ...

so simple. so good. i loved the simple layout of the poem and i specifically loved the flow in the story. i love the voice which tells the story and ...

Okay, first of all i don't know what pulled me towards this probably the country thing. I've read way too many songs of this type but then who hasn't? i ...

Well since it's a haiku not much to say really because I think haiku is more a medium to portray a little situation or feeling or anything in your own.. ...

okay. this was short. like really short. but i liked it. i liked the beginning i liked the body and i especially loved the end. i love the way you ...

Interesting concept. very interesting. your description was something that pulled me towards it. actually i'm going to try one on my own. i liked the flow of the story and ...

This was an interesting story and i liked it even though I've read some of its kind earlier. So even though its a familiar plot i loved to go through ...

Okay, so first of all I can totally relate to it. So let me tell you what I thought of it. First and foremost, the description you gave along with ...