theironnovelist

hi there! I haven't read the other chapters in this series. Forgive me for that :) this review will mostly be on general thingies...not the overall context. First of all, ...

hello there! I have not read the other chapters in this series of yours, so I'm sorry if this isn't a very personal review. XD Because of this, I also ...

hey ulala! I have not read your other chapters of this I apologize. Bear with me. I don't have much to say. I think you're a very talented writer and ...

Hello there. I haven't read the other chapter/parts to this story, so this was a bit out-of-context for me. I'll do my best :) I already like what you're doing ...

Ooh way to leave the readers wondering what's going on- especially when that 'thing' that's going on is in your MC's head! So we have met our antagonist. Nice set-up ...

heya Rosey. Nice little piece here! Thanks for separating the stanzas! Really like that. On the topic of format, though, I might quickly suggest that when you have a line ...

Hi! I'm tired tonight and didn't want to review any more but I saw this chapter and thought I should read it and catch up :) Seems to be going ...

okay so hey bro. Good job on your first poem! I would like to begin by giving the piece of advice I give every poet, because it was the best ...

hi wow this has been sitting in my review drafts forever... I looove that ending. I can't explain very well why, but I think it's a great idea that this ...

a good chapter ! :) I like how the beginning kind of went back even before the first chapter, explaining some more exposition information. Nice recap. One spelling thing: “Can’t ...

PENDR PENDR PENDR PENDR I saw this and was like WAT and then I saw that you wrote it...and it all made sense. I just love the fact that something ...

hello there, taylor. I like the amount of emotion you've successfully packed into five lines. Only two tiny suggestions: I think this poem would definitely stick out more and grab ...

heya hai hello howya doin? So I've read a few chapters in this series before, so forgive me if I don't talk much about the plot because, in my mind, ...

hello there. I'm not going to lie...this is probably the most sadistic piece I've ever read on YWS. But that's okay...writing is usually a healthy way of expressing emotions. I ...

hello, TheWeather! (appropriate name for the author of this piece) I really enjoyed this poem! Autumn is my very favorite season, and you displayed it well. I loved your wording, ...