thegreyreality

This was absolutely great. It made me laugh to read. You're a pretty good and imaginative writer! I admire that. I don't see anything wrong with this, but here goes ...

*left about 15 minutes ago, finds review day over...* Purple, This is a little terrifying, in a good way. I really like this poem because it makes you think. It ...

This was slightly heartbreaking. I know that this is very true and I amazed someone could hit the mark so well in such a short poem. I really only have ...

Oh my dear goodness, you've given me chills. The vocabulary is perfect and the imagery is spot on. I understand the topic somewhat, barely enough to understand this a little, ...

Hi, Fortis! GreyReality here! I really wanted to thank you for sharing perhaps a haunting experience. This poem is expertly written as the repetition allows one to feel as if ...

Hi there, Here's a last minute review for you! I could see this being the first stanza to a wonderful poem, but just this doesn't convey all that much. I ...

To be quite honest, this made me sad to read. Yes, I saw the +18, and sure, it's not something I'd normally read, but this doesn't make me hate, and ...

So I just had a little gripe when I was reading a review of this poem... poetry doesn't really have rules. Some of the greatest writers break rules to make ...

I love this quite a bit. It has an innocence to it, or maybe it's just because I feel I can relate to it so well. It brings the image ...

Hey, Vibe! So I really appreciated hearing your thoughts on my poem, and I wanted to return the favor. A lot of the things have already been said... Capitalization would ...

So, I read this last night at like one in the morning, because that was when I got home... bad idea. It's a little scary. Maybe it was just the ...

THANKS FOR TELLING ME THIS WAS UP HERE. NOT. I like the changes to the first paragraph. (; This is better than the first time I read it because now ...

To be quite frank, I clicked on this poem expecting it to be a really weepy piece that would be easy to review. I was really glad when I reached ...

I found this to be quite interesting. Reminds me of yin and yang, and other forces that balance each other out in the world. On one hand I might say ...

Oooh this is so cool! It was lovely! And I love how you cemented in the image with the words and the picture together. It was just so clear. The ...