thegoldenbird

Hi there! I wanna begin by saying that this was a well-written composition, and for some reason made me think that it would seem nice as a song. You've got ...

Hi there! I would like to begin by telling you that this is a well-written story and the concept is nice. It definitely got me engaged and I liked the ...

Hey there! This was a nice read and definitely captured the thoughts and feelings well. However, there are a few mistakes and shortcomings that I noticed in the poem: 1. ...

Hey there. This is TheGoldenBird, here to leave a review. The one thought which went through my mind as I was reading this was, "Oh, how I wish I couldn't ...

Hey there! This is thegoldenbird and I wanted to leave a review. To begin with, this is a nice poem. Short, but tries to convey the daily life and insecurities ...

Hey JesseWrites! I dropped by to let you know that this poem is an amazing work, one of the best I have read in some time. The use of words, ...

Hey HKumar! I dropped by to tell you that this work is really beautifully written. Being a procrastinator myself, I successfully manage to waste and while away most of my ...

Hey JenTep! I just went through your work and wanted to tell you that it has been written nicely. Well expressed, precision in thought along with the right amount of ...

Hi Wynorrific! I just wanted to tell you how well this poem is written. Usually people don't read long poems (although I like to), but it's kind of impossible to ...

Hi silverquill12! This poem gave me the chills as I went on reading it. It was a nice combination of the independent thoughts and the flow of the poem and ...

Hi Junel! This was a nice story that I happened to come across, the type of perception difference that I like to write too! It felt nice to see someone ...

This was an excellent write. I could truly appreciate and feel the toll a judgemental society takes on the common people. Sure, we think of beaches as a place to ...

Hello Horisun. The above poem is short and precise and I found it to be good in emotion. However, I would like to say that you should definitely work on ...

Hey. This piece of writing made me stop and think about my own life. I happen to have a similar relationship with my guitar and the other musical instruments that ...

This is a well written poem and I liked how the thought and feeling as been conveyed in the form of words. However, you could improve a couple of things. ...