thegilliangill

Howdy there! I've just got to say, first of all, that I really liked the poem, and the content is good. Just a few nitpicks though. In my opinion it ...

Howdy there! I read through this poem and I wasn't too keen on it if I am honest, but after re-reading it I saw a lot more in it. You've ...

Howdy there! I've read the poem several times over, and I have to say, it's one interesting poem you've got there. Although it is really short, it is neat and ...

Howdy there! I think this is one of the best poems I've seen for imagery, I am just bursting with comments about it. Firstly, I love how you personify peace ...

Howdy there! At first glance of your poem I really like the layout. Whether it was intended or not the layout of the poem is similar to that of 'hills' ...

Howdy there! I'm going to critique your work today! The first word really drags me in but the second sentence lets it down a little. I wouldn't recommend starting a ...

Howdy There! I love the song one thousand miles by Vanessa Carlton, and knowing it certainly made it easier to understand. To anyone who is reading this and is unaware ...

Howdy there! What you have written is okay. It's not to a quality standard though. The moral/idea is good you need to develop. Give descriptions, lengthen this piece. Change your ...

Hai There I have to say I really liked this. I had a poem within a story which made it really interesting. I found the layout very unique and fascinating ...

Hai there! Firstly I really like these lyrics. They seem to flow so perfectly. However at first glance I was worried about the little use of grammar; correction no use ...

I agree with XxJoJoxX here I am afraid. Whilst it probably made sense to you, to me this was unreadable. As XxJoJoxX said where is your spelling? It is obviously ...

I agree with aqua babe. That really was astonishing. You should be proud with that, there aren't any nit picks. But then again, you caught me up in the flow ...

I think this is a really really good poem. It seems to me that it has a clear message and it has been put across very well. I personally think ...

Overall I think it is a reasonable attempt, and to say you aren't very good at poetry is a lie. Here you have produced a reasonable poem, and with a ...

I think this is really good. I felt the flow throughout, the only one bit that didn't work for me straight off was the second verse, but after reading it ...