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Re: Too tired
Heya! Here's a review for you as your work caught my eye by the title! First off I would like to welcome you to YWS and I believe you will ...
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Re: six months too late, a lifetime too soon
Heyo! I'm Zayin and I'm here to review your creation! ദ്ദി ˉ͈̀꒳ˉ͈́ )✧ This poem is a raw and heartfelt exploration of love, longing, and the bittersweet ache of unrequited ...
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Re: burnt pansies ripped apart
Heyo! I'm Zayin and I'm here to review this lovely complexing piece of work. (ദ്ദി ˉ͈̀꒳ˉ͈́ )✧ This poem is a powerful and haunting meditation on identity, transformation, and the ...
Dec 7, 2024 -
Re: I saw the TV glow
Heyo! I'm Zayin and I'm here to review this lovely piece of work! (๑˃̵ᴗ˂̵)و This poem is a tender and deeply evocative exploration of identity, inner conflict, and the pressures ...
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Re: I look around (Vent..? again)
Heyo! I'm Zayin and I'm here to review your lovely work! ᕙ( •̀ ᗜ •́ )ᕗ This poem captures a strong sense of inner conflict, isolation, and yearning for freedom, ...
Dec 7, 2024 -
Re: Perpetual Motion
Heyo! I'm Zayin and I am here to review this lovely piece you've made! ᯓ★ This poem is a delightful exploration of physicality, play, and the relationship between the body ...
Dec 7, 2024 -
Re: Out on a limb (Vent?)
Heyo! I decide to take a stroll and found this lovely poem before me and decide to review it! (That was cringy but the damage is one now-) Anyways, I'm ...
Dec 7, 2024 -
Re: bear it
Heyo! I'm Zayin and I'm here to review this lovely piece of work! ヘ( ^o^)ノ\(^_^ ) This poem is a striking and deeply emotional exploration of struggle, resilience, and the ...
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Re: the lifecycle of a star
This poem is a stunning exploration of existence, creation, and the inevitable cycle of life and death. The vivid imagery used to describe the internal and cosmic processes is incredibly ...
Dec 7, 2024 -
Re: Never again
I sympathize with you and I wish you nothing but future eternal happiness and peace. Better days are certainly coming and with each passing day I hope you will feel ...
Dec 6, 2024 -
Re: Am I important?
Heyo! This is Zayin and this is my review! Your poem captures a deeply personal and relatable internal struggle, beautifully expressing the tension between ambition and the fear of being ...
Dec 6, 2024 -
Re: where i end and you begin
Heyo it's Zayin, and before I type my review out I just wanted to say that this poem is filled with so many strong aspects and you did a wonderful ...
Dec 6, 2024 -
Re: In music I found you
This poem has a lovely emotional depth and a sense of vulnerability. It captures a feeling of longing and connection, especially through the imagery of music, love, and the self. ...
Dec 6, 2024 -
Re: Gold plated love
This is really nice! I really enjoyed the lines: "I'm not blinded And yet I still can't see." I interpreted that this implies falling for something that's not longer what ...
Dec 6, 2024 -
Re: The breakup
This hit close to my heart and I resonate with this a lot. When love begins to not feel like love it soon becomes about letting that feeling and pleasure ...
Nov 25, 2024
