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I like this poem and the font. There's a nice, dry sense of humour to it that I really like and think there needs to be more of in poetry. ...

This prologue's very interesting and intriguing. However, it's a bit short and slightly confusing, maybe due to the shortness of it. It feels like three random paragraphs or a teaser ...

I'm not sure how to even pronounce the title with the 'bo1', but I'm about as proficient in chatspeak as an eighty-year-old grandma. Speaking of chatspeak (referring to substituting u ...

I like this. It's cute and fun. I'd suggest thinking about changing the title to something else, so you don't give away the acrostic part of the poem. However, a ...

Greetings! I am a squire of the Great Green Room, happy to greet you for this review. I'd like to start with- I know it's regarded as nitpicky, but- the ...

Wow. This is great. I personally love short poems rather than longer ones, so good choice in poem-length. I also enjoyed how you began and ended with the same phrase, ...

This piece has a nice message, though I'm afraid it may at times be more complex that "Do what you love, love what you do." Also, there seems to be ...

I love the ending and I love historical poems; I love how they teach you something with all the beauty of a normal poem. That being said, I might shorten ...

In the line 'People saw "Where is He"?', the question mark needs to be moved inside the quotation marks. I know this is a nitpicky thing, but it's a change ...

I like this poem; I agree with Via, the mood is lovely. I would consider changing the title though, if I was you. It's too long and a bit bulky ...

Hi! First of all, I really like the feel of this novel. You do a good job of establishing a feeling of suspense from the start. I also like the ...

I have a soft spot for long, thin poems, but I think your's might be a bit too thin at certain points, especially in the second stanza, I'd have a ...

Hi, Mayyda! I will be reviewing your poem today. I like the poem as a whole but there were a few lines that didn't make sense, such as, "Getting things ...

Hello! At the beginning, I like how you sort of pull us right in to what's happening right away; that's good. I don't know why, but personally, I've never been ...

Hi. I don't enjoy how the first stanzas all 'they' and then it switches to 'we' abruptly. Am I stupid, or did you mean rebels when you said revels? The ...