summerlovee

Hello :) I really liked this poem! There was such a natural and gradual flow and feeling to this poem, it beautifully captured the start and end of a relationship. ...

Hello :) My initial response after reading the poem was confusion, I thought it was a very short poem :P I do believe in quality over quantity but there needs ...

Hello! I want to first say that I'm sorry you have to go through what you're going through. I wrote a similar poem about 3 years ago but at the ...

Hello! Can I just start by saying that this is so close what happened to me yesterday (or today if you're in a different time zone, except my mum didn't ...

Hello :) I really really loved this Lyrical Poetry! I can already hear the soft acoustic guitar strumming along and these 'lyrics' feel raw and have so many emotions behind ...

Hello :) First off, I really liked this poem. I got the feeling that you were trying to convey the most important things are, in fact, invisible. I think because ...

Hello :) Okay wow. I really loved this poem. It explores the permanent nature of memories while also showing the importance of childhood memories. :) It is a theme that ...

Hey :) I really love this poem. I love the way its structured where you describe her then you (I'm guessing) and the last stanza which wraps up everything very ...

Hello :) Okay, I'm going to start off and say that this story does have potential. However, you do have to work on a few things to create a better ...

Hello :) I really like these lyrics because it is really well written. I can get a grasp on what this person is going through/feeling (I wasn't sure if this ...

All I have to say is wow.... Honestly, I never read short stories on this website unless they're super short because when I do take the time to read a ...

Hey! I'm going to start off by saying that this piece made me grin and cringe for the poor fellow who couldn't help but act like a fool around the ...

Hello :) This was a really good piece! I loved the way you described the feeling of looking back on fond memories with a loved one. I loved the first ...

Hey! I really love the way you poetically described how much this trip has changed you and how much you were going to miss it. There is a good flow ...

WOW. Okay let me just say that I was really not expecting a recording to go along with any lyric piece but I am so glad that you did it ...