sugarxsnow

Good grammar. Good wording. Good flow. But it's cliche. Why is life loathsome? Why are you mundane? Clarify these and more. It sounds to me like you're just ranting... in ...

Hi! Kate here, at your service. Till they all build up with my sorrows they stay. I've read the above reviews. If you want to convey it in the way ...

They don't make sense, them haikus... so... REFRIGERATOR. 8D Seriously, I LOL'd when I saw this. I don't agree it's a work of genius, though... I've seen better randomness. Oh ...

Astig men! Go pinoy! :D I loved the idea that someone had actually written a Filipino poem and posted it in YWS... because, well... I'm a Filipino, too. If that ...

Um... I really have no comment about how you have written this because the imagery is quite good and there's really nothing much to complain about (plus I'm not in ...

Oh my... XD My fave: Professor Severus Snape: *glides in* Settle down, you pathetic, uneducated children. We are, sadly, acquainted and there is no need to bore me with your ...

Wow... I must say. :D I'm speechless. No nitpicks whatsoever! I love this! *Gold Star* Keep it up! :smt023 Or else I shall bite you in your sleep. Rawr. xD

Taga-PINAS kaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaah! *cheers* I'm also from the Philippines! :D I'm Katrina, but you can call me Kat-kat or Katie for short~ I'll be your critic for the moment~ First off... ...

Hi~ Katie here, and I'm going to give you a quick review~ :D First off... The streets were dark as the figure moved silently towards the last house. The lights ...

Hello! Katie here, and I'm going to give you a really quick review :D First of all, I have no nitpicks~! No, seriously. I have none. I just want you ...

Hello! My name is Katie, and I will be your critic for this moment~ I was once told that you must write what you know, I know quite a lot ...

Hi! Katie here, and I'll be your critic for this moment. :D Firstly... With a ring around her neck she can not, make a sound. I believe you meant 'cannot', ...

To tell the truth I think it is very cliche.The vocabular and imaginitive is horrible, and frankly the idea sounds a bit used. But, your writing does have promise and ...

Kinda Hans Christian Andersen-ish... But meh, that may be a coincidence. How cute can one story get? I was grinning widely when I finished reading this. Nice piece... :)

Alanis scrambles up the latter after her. Um... 'latter' should be 'ladder', as the many reviewers above had pointed out... She tiptoes to the edge of the top of the ...