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starryknightt

  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: In my mind

    Hey again! I actually love this poem more than the last one. It's, seriously, beautiful. Your mind is like a glass prism and this poem thrust it into the sunlight. ...

    Mar 13, 2019
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Silver and Gold

    Hey! I figured I should repay the favor for being an amazing reviewer (though I'm not sure I can live up to it, quite frankly). I opened this poem and ...

    Mar 13, 2019
  • Poetry » Romantic, Dramatic Re: You Broke Me

    Hey! Dude, you are so so talented! It's insane, honestly. This is a beautiful poem. It's smooth and flowing. I read it very easily and the images that came to ...

    Mar 13, 2019
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: relapse or not

    Hi! I just... wow. This is breath-taking. Simply powerful. You were straight to the point and I FELT it when you got there. "a 9-year-old's sobs" was the most wrenching ...

    Mar 11, 2019
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: Streeetside Sonnet

    Hey! Talk about a plot twist. I thought I was in for something really deep and emotional but you're like NOPE JUST A BENCH and I love that, honestly. I ...

    Mar 11, 2019
  • Poetry » General, General Re: The Tunnel

    Hi! This poem was like a punch in the gut for me. A brilliant punch in the gut. As someone who struggles with depression and anxiety, I relate to this ...

    Mar 10, 2019
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: Am i falling in love with her

    Hey! First, I'm just going to.... awwwwwwww. This is cute. Like, I need more info so I can ship. Anyway, this is a fantastic poem. One of the best I've ...

    Mar 10, 2019
  • Novel / Chapter » Romantic, Teen Fiction Re: My girl Beggening of chapter 1

    Hello, there! I like this story so far. I think it has a lot of different directions it could take. I look forward to seeing where you take this story! ...

    Mar 10, 2019
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Romantic Re: [our universe goes here] - revised

    Hello! Holy cow, this might be one of my all-time favorite poems on here. I'm not even exaggerating. I'm obsessed with space and everything to do with it. It is ...

    Mar 9, 2019
  • Poetry » Other, Dramatic Re: Crush( first poem) plz check it out

    Hey! Daaang. I love it. I mean, I normally love everything, but this is pretty good. You really are very good at poetry. I seriously can't believe this is your ...

    Mar 9, 2019
  • Novel / Chapter » General, General Re: Soul Keeper chapters 2-4

    Hey, there! This story is only getting better, and I can't wait to see where it goes next. The characters are still great, however, I would describe them a bit ...

    Mar 9, 2019
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: Life

    Hello! I really really like this poem. I love the idea of it, the curiosity. I'm a very curious person so of course, I relate to it. Your grammar seems ...

    Mar 9, 2019
  • Poetry » General, General Re: The Last Night

    Hello! The emotion is conveyed so well in this poem. The sadness is almost piercing. Even though I've never been in a situation like this myself, I can still sympathize ...

    Mar 9, 2019
  • Poetry » General, General Re: I don’t care

    This is a magnificent poem. I really enjoyed it. The grammar is pretty stellar, too. I also felt like I could really relate to it. That is both sides of ...

    Mar 9, 2019
  • Poetry » Realistic, Romantic Re: I Hope You Know

    Wow. Just... wow. I feel the emotion of this poem pouring off my computer screen. It's intense...and I love it. I'm getting powerful, angry vibes. It's amazing. You've done so ...

    Mar 9, 2019


If I see an American in real life or a kiwi in a blockbuster, it feels surreal and weird, and like a funny trip.
— SirenCymbaline the Kiwi