starlinks

First of all, I hope you're feeling better now. Migraines can be such a (literal) pain. :( For the poem-- 1. I love the reference to Greek mythology with Athena-Zeus ...

First of all, (intentional or not), I commend you for the effort using OneRepublic's song title "Counting Stars"! Definitely attracted me to read the poem because the name is so ...

Welcome to Young Writers Society! (though I am relatively new myself haha) For your poem, I like the idea, but the execution needs some work (just in my opinion, so ...

I love the repetition of "remember" in your poem! It really iterates (and urges the audience/reader) the theme of the poem, which I assume to be "remember the better days ...

Hey, great poem right here! I like how you utilized the sensory details and imagery to their full potentials, but diction and rhythm can also be used to improve your ...

This poem is so beautifully written with such vivid imagery that it made me want to go to a beach immediately, well done! I would say that you might consider ...

I love this poem! It's very relatable with the way that you are using only pronouns to address each individual characters in the poem. It also flows really nicely, although ...

Hey lyricalrebel, I'm so sorry. :( It's such a sad and touching poem, and I can definitely relate. (Similar things did happen to me, but unfortunately, after four years of ...

Hey InfinityAndBeyond, I really like your poem! It makes me especially happy that I understood all your references--they are so well-placed and you fit them perfectly into the stanzas, bravo! ...

There's a lot of big and fancy words in this poem, and it reminds me a little bit of Jabberwocky, where the reader determines what each word meant and turn ...

...I am definitely in awe--so much that I have pretty much nothing to say but that this is a beautiful piece of work that deserve many praises and compliments. I'll ...

I love it! I really like how you used the imagery (particularly on the waves and the ship's scenery "with ropes thrown bout\With people tripping, and people to shout.) One ...

This is an awesome piece! I like the humor you have included in this poem, and the occasional rhymes you put in. Instead of having commas at the end of ...

I'm not very good at reviewing but here goes: 1. I really like your word choice and phrases like "a vast expanse of nothingness" or "a delicate line of ink". ...

Just a few things: 1. Avoid using "can't" and "cannot" interchangeably, it can disrupt the flow during reading. 2. "Morth" = "Morph"? You have some great word choices, but sometimes ...