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Um. Don't listen to anything GrapeNerd is saying about adding more commas and periods. Read Gertrude Stein on punctuation from her Lectures in America book and get back to me. ...

A pleasant read, the words sort of like a nice layer of butter, easy to sort through, or like a slip-n-slide, easy to slip and slide across... Anyway. I like ...

OK, so let's begin, or whatever. "Break my fever break it break it" First things first: tell me why you have repetition, then tell me why you have no punctuation. ...

Some of these reviews... must... STAHP. I'm not sure what half the people are all talking about, and I'll admit that I'm not very good at poetry, but still. I ...

Why does a wolf cry boy? I will accept your answer in the form of a poem. If the boy cried wolf three times, doesn't this counter the perception of ...

Hm. I think I enjoy this poem. However, it is a little too simple for me. That's just me being rather picky though I suppose. I like the surface but ...

But what does it meeeaaaan??? I really don't know, and I would like to. I want a poem to be kind of heavy. I mean, like a really nice meal, ...

Hm, but what is it you're trying to say here? *nods head thoughtfully* I think what I would like to hear from you is... more? More. Let me proceed with ...

I don't really know what this is telling me. Or rather, I don't really get what's so important about it. And syntactically and onomatopoeia-y, it feels quite a bit generic ...

Truthfully, the only thing I feel obliged to critique is the sole fact it is a paragraph. It's quirky and I used to write things like this in English classes ...

I'm not sure I like this. :/ Then again, I'm a bit picky with poetry, so fear not my single opinion. :D [Also, I really liked your other poem. I'm ...

So I kind of like the first stanza. In fact I kind of like what you're talking about here, but I don't know if I'm adhering as much as I'd ...

Crying because beautiful.

Uh, I like it. Kind of surprisingly so, actually, because I'm not real big on structure, and this poem is so structured it seems retro-fitted. [I learned that word in ...

I'm real picky on poetry. I don't know what my deal is. And with this poem, with its neutral diction, simple meaning, free verse, I find myself really, really liking ...