Hey there!
I will start of with some things which are not right. This is the first one I noticed:
"And so he slowly smiled his eyes gleaming as they once had,
pressing a gently kiss
To my throbing temple
"But that's the game, my dear"
I think you should remove some words and this is the last few lines which didn't seem right:
"This here was the last words
My first love and I,
We ever spoke"
I don't think these are right at all.
Now for the things which have turned out to be the way that sound better and have come out correctly. I think everything else came out in the way you wanted (at least that is what I think).
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