speakerskat

Other then the spelling/grammer errors I loved it. You really described what that guy did quite well. I disagree,I don't reallly think anything should be moved. This is one of ...

Oh my god! I started crying! just a little longer and I would be all out sobbing! That was beautiful, I'm sorry for you truly . It was a very ...

I saw that you read night, and we just read that in my class (I'm only 13 so...). This unfortunatley describes both the book and the horrible genocide that was ...

Nice! The rythm was amazing , I liked how it kept the rythm without necessarily needing to rhyme. Lovely. I can't really say all that much more about it except ...

First thing I thought was it was a little messy. Not that that's bad. Sometimes like MindBlown said less words can be better and let your readers use their imagination ...

I guess I'm a little narrow minded. I don't think I totally understood the point of the poem. Nice and short though and what I got out of it was ...

HEY! Years and disappear doesn't rhyme very well, I know how hard it can be to keep a constant rhyme sometimes ;) Depends how one would pronounce again (A GAIN ...

Dude! I like this totally awesome guy and sometimes I feel the same way...but he is to funny to get sad about . I don't even know if he likes ...

harsh and kind of groos and dark. It lacked structure in the way of formatting a poem and when you say "on that day of judgment day" couldn't you just ...

I'm with my good friend mindblown. We read the Raven by edgar Allen Poe. I assume that's what you based it on. Granted a smidge creepy but that helps me ...

Can I just say WOAH! Not very poetic advice like I know but it's accurate. The only thing I suggest is prehaps breaking it up into stanzas so it's not ...

Ah! Sweetness! I almost started crying this was awesome for a free verse poem XD Your grammer was spot on and punctuation was NICE (I'm like the punctuation is a ...

Not going to repeat what everyone else said but.... re-formatting and fixing a few gramatical errors can really make or break a poem. I agree the flow is nice choppy ...

DUDE! NIIIIEEEEECCCCCEEEEE!Serves them right, no one likes a bully! "The pen is mightier than the sword" . I bet they were irritated! only thing I caught was where you said ...

I wish the first stanza were true Oh my gosh.Nice I really get the whole "song" feeling out of it. I noticed that you didn't use and punctuations such as ...