spanaki93

Iggy hi! spanaki93(the most God-awful name chosen for a writer wonna-be on this site) here for a review on your poetic piece "Beyond Looks" Many girls can easily relate to ...

A successful story according to my point of view is to keep you hooked from the very first line, so that you keep on reading.Yours did that to me.You set ...

You are a natural at describing things very vividly and accurately, I liked that.The whole tone of your story is very violent and I would prefer it more if you ...

I like the fact that it is short too, and I think that it doesn't need to be any longer.That is its charm.Doubt is a feeling that I am very ...

That is one of the most important things people need to remember in their lives!!Your poem reminded me of some very famous lyrics, no wonder that song is still a ...

Your poem is really cute!! the rythm is excellent, and it is very happy and reminds me of a hot sunny day and the picture you've created in my head ...

That is indeed short but I will agree that it is powerful.I like your use of words, and the good thing about it is that when someone reads it gets ...

Ok, if this is trully your first poem, you have talent. Seriously.You have created mesmerizing pictures in my head, plus you have succeeded into making me experience the emotions you ...

In general I liked your poem.There is a simplicity to it that makes it more concrete and meaningful in a way of its own.I can really relate to it, because ...

The very moment I started reading, I realized that I put a rythm to it subconsciously!this would be a very good song plently of humor.The feeling of it very joyful ...

Well, this seems more like a speech to me than a poem.Too many questionmarks, your point is really clear from the very beginning, and it kinda doesn't capture your interest.The ...

First of all, I would like to say hi!! Now about the poem, all I can say is that it kept me interested, your idea about creating your a new ...

Your poem is good.According to me. I thing that you are trying to say is that fear is in he mind, something ou could easily overcome if you tried..just like ...

I really like the image you have created in my head...the last line is incredibly strong it is exatly what the poem needed in order to have a smooth end...very ...

That was a very nice story, it reminded me of my best friend, and how we used to be together, before high school.I am a dreamer myself and dragons are ...