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  • Poetry » Dramatic, Realistic Re: True Beauty

    I agree there are many different ways people see beauty...mine is a simple flower budding or the pond near my house or the way my sister can be so happy ...

    Nov 2, 2013
  • Poetry » Lyrical, Realistic Re: I'm sorry

    I know how you feel :( I actually wrote a poem called sorry to...but mine is made by me so it's different...but I wrote my a while back and I'm ...

    Sep 15, 2013
  • Poetry » Lyrical, Realistic Re: What you'll never see

    I don't think it's terrible ^^ it could probably use a few more lines but I like it I think it's great so nice job it might be short but ...

    Sep 15, 2013
  • Poetry » Realistic, Teen Fiction Re: Cut

    I feel it's not right to judge people until you judge yourself so I'm not going to judge you and I understand how you could turn to the knife instead ...

    Sep 15, 2013
  • Script » Science Fiction, Action / Adventure Re: A Time Machine and a Bullet- SCREENPLAY

    wow I wasn't sure if I would finish this because I was tired...but now I'm wide awake this story is just amazing I just love it! Except I knew something ...

    Sep 11, 2013
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: Huddle up!

    this was a bizarre poem and I found it was a little short but that's fine anyways I would add another line to the poem and I would advise you ...

    May 26, 2013
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Red

    this was a strange poem though I loved it I feel its to short but I'm not sure if you could possible add anymore words because its already got so ...

    May 26, 2013
  • Poetry » Narrative, General Re: A Cowardly Pandora

    this was an interesting poem I found it strangely intriguing and it was weird but I think you made it into an awesome poem when at first it might have ...

    May 26, 2013
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Eden

    I loved this poem and I must say great job I had to keep reading when I saw the words The darkened sky The hallowed ground so I kept reading ...

    May 26, 2013
  • Poetry » Culture, General Re: December

    I thought it was a good poem but I think it should probably have a few more verses and I was sad to see how short it was because I ...

    May 26, 2013
  • Poetry » General, General Re: A Story to Tell

    hello um I hope you don't mind me reviewing your poem...but here's what I was very good and I enjoyed reading it but I also think it was a bit ...

    May 26, 2013
  • Poetry » Romantic, Dramatic Re: He was the Past, You're my Future

    um hi...I'm not good at this reviewing thing but I'll um I thought it was an odd poem but I liked it and I think its pretty good...I think you ...

    May 26, 2013
  • Poetry » Romantic, Dramatic Re: Ode to a Raven's Call

    this is a incredibly sad yet passionate story of sorrow and yet its words are still ring through my ears as though it is calling to me to read it ...

    May 21, 2013
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Like Wine

    I like this poem and I'm sure you've noticed but mystery was miss spelled I like the initial thought of the poem and its really easy to comprehend um it ...

    May 21, 2013
  • Poetry » Realistic, Dramatic Re: Judgement

    I have often wondered the same things and I love how you worded it its great though there are some people that many have issues with the way you put ...

    May 21, 2013


No great thing is created suddenly. There must be time. Give your best and always be kind.
— Epictetus