snowberry23

Well, I understand the message, it’s plain and very clear. I can understand, from my own experiences, what that feeling can feel like, but if I were being honest, I ...

Okay, well where to start. First off, excellent job, this poem really spoke to me, and I know that people can use that as a line that doesn’t really have ...

Wow, and I mean truly wow. I could easily right click to synonyms for the word wow and have knockout or sensation take this three letter word’s place but I ...

Wow--that is what writing truly is. You told a story that was almost like still photo frames for us to watch as we read. It is very hard to make ...

Hey, so…not to be that kid, but I didn’t really like this. Sorry, I know that’s a bit harsh, but I have just so happened to read seventeen of Shakespeare’s ...

I loved this! The way you word things it very eclectic and i honestly love this...i read it about four times before realizing i should post to say how much ...

Wow, I am truly in love with this poem! Let me just say that-- So I'll smile and I'll wear This fake air of indifference utterly amazed me, I am ...

I am at a loss for words ...this was more than incredible. I loved your message, the voice within the piece, the rhetorical questions I loved loved loved it. I ...

I felt--how should i describe this--connected to this piece. I honestly loved the overall message and your way of getting to the point--everything. I do agree with nova though-- I ...

Hey, okay so let’s see—for starters there is a little miniscule grammar mistake, you forgot the y in the word “they” in the “Each day the flew higher” sentence, no ...

I felt a good connection to this poem, especially sense I know a girl who lies a lot, but it kind of relooks at the idea of reality, lies, truth, ...

I utterly loved this piece—I almost want to illustrate it… I noticed that most of the little grammar mistakes have already been pointed out, but I hate grammar and didn’t ...

If I could give you an A plus I would—I just loved this piece! I almost think it should be longer… Hm, I don’t know, just a thought. It may ...

Well I absolutely love this piece! I can really connect with it considering how I can sit at a blank document for hours and hit backspace more times than I ...

Hey, i really realte to this poem, sorry if that's a little weird. Anyway, I can completely see someone thinking this if you were trying to put a mental image ...