snowberry23

Its funny, during the massive review day we had, I kept talking about word choice and placement, and how it plays such a vital part in poetry, at least I ...

I would say you are very much correct; you do have a good poem here! I love when people talk about power in poetry, because to me, power is endless, ...

Okay so I really like your poem, I just can’t help but say that it’s kind of all clumped together right now. Think of your poem as someone on an ...

Okay, first off, let me just say this is the first lyric/poetry piece that I have reviewed/read on YWS that really makes me feel like I could sing this song. ...

Different, the first word I thought of when I started reading this piece was different. I do, however disagree with you; I truly loved this piece of work. My only ...

Wow, this is something unlike I have ever seen before. I am actually a huge fan of rain. Thunder and lightning even crawled their way into my college essay. I ...

I have no idea if this actually happened or not, and weather it did or not is regardless, there is no feeling in this piece, it is just bitter, slightly ...

Well this idea was definitely something that has been done before, but I think your poem added some really creative twists to it that I haven’t seen before, nor did ...

Let me start off by saying that I think the idea of this poem is spectacular and the way you went about writing it makes it even better. Are you ...

I knew you had talent, but this, this is INCREDIBLE. If you don’t mind me asking where did you get this idea from? Anyway, let me start with my slight ...

Okay, I have a lot to suggestion, so let me get right down to it, but before I do, I just want to say the entire idea is very amiable, ...

I just want to start of this review by saying I have been working on a poem involving cutting and I just can’t seem to get the lines right. But ...

Well, first of all let me just say, the 90’s were the best times of my life! I saw this and thought, I HAVE to review this. I think you ...

Well, after reading your review I couldn’t help but feel like my writing was good, but after reading this piece I have learned that your writing is extraordinary. The entire ...

Wow, I think XxJoJoxX said it best. This is everything you need to say in four lines. If you can write something this amazing in under five lines, you will ...