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  • Poetry » General, Action / Adventure Re: the road of memories

    hey there oh my i really loved this one! the simple idea of familly road trips turned into a cute lovely poem like this one is great. parts i found ...

    Oct 28, 2022
  • Poetry » Realistic, Narrative Re: my younger self

    hello there i just want to say that this piece is very simple yet brings lots of emotions and i can relate to it! i mean anyone would relate,right? everyone ...

    Oct 28, 2022
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Safe Place

    heyooo i hope you're doing just well! i'm here for a review let me just tell you that your poem describes well the lonliness felt by people sometimes, when they ...

    Nov 22, 2018
  • Poetry » Lyrical, Narrative Re: Rainy days

    hello there first of all i want to say this piece is just AMAZING! i loved the idea of this poem it's very unique and i kind of find it ...

    Nov 22, 2018
  • Poetry » Humor, General Re: It's Not Just A Game !

    hey there i was searching in your works and this was what i found catchy, because i just love football i first i thought you're talking about the american football ...

    Nov 8, 2018
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Narrative Re: The View from Here

    hello there i wanna say that your poem is the best well-describing piece about depression out of all those i've read.WHY? because of all those details you gave,you used very ...

    Jan 25, 2015
  • Poetry » Lyrical, Other Re: Another Winter

    hey there this is a lovely someone who loves winter and snow i found this very fresh and pure something you could imagine and live easily while reading the lines,it ...

    Jan 25, 2015
  • Poetry » General, General Re: You and I

    hellooo :D reading the title makes me remember one direction's song,it's very good btw. back to reviewing,THIS IS SO SAD but i love it,the content is very true and powerful ...

    Jan 25, 2015
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Other Re: Twisted Lives.

    hey there,smile here with a review :D SO,i really liked the idea of this poem, very enjoyable and kind of scary ( in a good way) "Born from the lies ...

    Jan 25, 2015
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Other Re: Shadow Friends

    hey there so this is a nice piece of poetry,it flows good tegether and i enjoyed the rhymy parts. for the theme and the use of words i think it ...

    Jun 10, 2014
  • Poetry » Narrative, Humor Re: Writer's Block

    hello there, smiley is here for her first review since ages of laziness so, i'll start with nitpicks: -"i cant think coherent thoughts " should be "i can't think of ...

    Jun 10, 2014
  • Poetry » Humor, General Re: 1

    hey there this is such a nice poem,its idea is awesome and no , not pointless, it made me smile!! the way it's written and how i kept READING...just , ...

    Jun 10, 2014
  • Poetry » Humor, Humor Re: Why I'm called anonymous

    Helloo smiley is here for a review :-) Ok , first off i wanna say that this is truly amazing poem , i find the idea so attractive , the ...

    Mar 31, 2014
  • Poetry » Spiritual, General Re: Empty Hands

    hello there wow this is super AWESOME piece that i really enjoyed reading , the idea , the title , the rhymes they're all important parts that made your poem ...

    Mar 30, 2014
  • Lyrics » Dramatic, Romantic Re: Out in the Cold

    HELLO THERE smile is is here for a review , okay so this piece is so deep and true , it describes well how you can feel when your lover ...

    Mar 30, 2014


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