Young Writers Society

It's smartdog90 here, doing another review! :) I like how you keep the flow almost completely perfect. There were only two instances that messed it up because it didn't rhyme; ...

It's smartdog90 here, doing another review! :) Flow: The flow is pretty good, but it could be better. In some parts two lines next to each other rhyme, like: "never ...

It's smartdog90 here, doing another review! :) Before I start I just want to save that this is a heartfelt poem nonetheless, but it's very short so I'm going to ...

It's Smartdog90 here, doing another review! :) Flow: The flow is ok, I like how each line transitions, but it's a little hard to follow. It's not enough to mess ...

It's Smartdog90, here to do another review! :) Flow: There isn't really a flow in this poem, mostly because it's free verse. Either way the flow is hard to read, ...

smartdog90 here writing another review on another great work :) Wow, this story is really interesting. I couldn't stop reading, at first I thought it was just another story, but ...

Hi NicolMemo! smartdog90 here writing another review on another great poem! I like how the poem makes the reader feel welcomed and happy. I've never heard of tanka, but I ...

Hi Alice :) First off I think this is a lovely poem, it has a lot of emotion coming out of it. Before I tell you how much I LOVED ...

I love how the conversation goes back and forth between the clones, Anakin, and Akelia; it makes a really funny story. However, I think you should let us readers know ...

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