silvermoon17

I get the dark feel, mood, whatever- but I’m not sure what you were aiming for here. Were you aiming for a dark poem? So like you just decided you ...

Hi! Here for a review. Well, firstly I personally really liked the way you structure, the small lines. The tiny sentences, with words full of meaning crammed in each of ...

Your poem is a very simple poem. I hope you take no offense in what I just said, but it’s just what I thought your poem was when I finished ...

Just wanted to say.. before I start reviewing.. that this is very well written. Although there is one thing I missed.. who is “they?” “They” came from the sky, (which ...

There’s something which is so.. so painfully beautiful about your poem. I guess it’s the way you structure everything. From the choice of words, down to the rhymes. I must ...

I feel the need to talk about what Sujit said below. You are not helping anyone by criticizing this poem. You are just destroying the writer even more with your ...

“You hold on to the details of the brow arch and the edges of their mouth when they smile; and hope to disappear in the crease” This poem is.. really ...

Don’t take me wrong.. your poem completely demoralized me when I saw it’s length. At least you had the grace to make stanzas. It makes it airy. But it’s just ...

Apathy: lack of enthusiasm, interest or concern In a sense.. apathy is not really like an emotion. More like a feeling. It’s a rhetorical question really. Is the feeling of ...

Hello hello Up first.. in what way is someone crying with his head in his hands have any ressemblance with a LONDON BELL The metaphor is nice though, it really ...

The one thing that struck me in your poem of tragedy, is the rhymes. Exactly, there are none. A story of love has a flow, it’s the best way to ...

Unlike the previous poems I just reviewed which were very dark and very glum and all- yours does surprise me a little. But what can I say about it.. the ...

10. Hi! Here for a late review. So just to point out, I am very very against what SeekingTheTruth said. This part: ”..(I really liked this poem because)..from all the ...

The first thing I must point out is that, in your poem; you actually have this little intro in the beginning. I know I’ve not been here for such a ...

Hi, here for a rather late review. So right after I read your poem, like; for the first time- I thought the last line was hinting to the fact that ...