silverfin713

I really enjoyed this. The way each line is a question really gives it a certain punch that I like. The imagery is quite dark and haunting, but well written. ...

Another amazing chapter, but what would I expect? :) I absolutely love this story and can't wait until the next chapter! I really like the tree, as it plays a ...

Hello, here is your review. I will put my likes and dislikes. Likes: First, I would just like to say how I love the originality of your work. It's not ...

Incredible poem! I love the tone that comes out in the poem, a sort of angry, bitterness, showing all the horrific things that do happen in this world. I also ...

Alright, here's your review. I'll give you both my likes and my dislikes. Dislikes: There isn't a whole lot to say here, but there are a few things I would ...

My first customer, woohoo! Alright, here's your review. First stanza: "Painless virtue is what I desired A desire so strong to leave A force so delicate that I feared it ...

I really love this piece! It has just the right doses of insanity, sickness, cruelty and devestation to really come together into a dark, can't-put-down-even though you're creeped out- sort ...

Alright, I want to start off by saying that this story has TONS of potential and could really reach out to other teens facing similiar problems and thinking nobody really ...

Wow! Let me say first, this poem is incredible. It has an unusual sort of vibe to it. A sort of mystery and eerie-ness that is like a darkly melodic ...

Wow, I'm impressed by this poem! It has such an alluring and melodic quality to it that is hard to achieve. The words flow beautifully, like some kind of music. ...

Very creative poem! And true! I also agree with considering taking out the quotation marks because I think it took away from the poem and was a little distracting. The ...

I really liked this little story! I LOVED the surprise ending! I thought I was being really deductive and was like, I know, the kind lady morphs into a blood ...

This is light years away from horrible! I really, really liked it. I like the starkness of it, how it just comes out and thows the truth out in a ...

OOOOH! SHERLOCK HOLMES! WATSON!IIIII I love those two! It's the first time I've actually seen a poem on them so kudos to you. I think it was very well written ...

This is a cool poem! The concept is interesting and the rhyme adds a good word flow. It raises some good, thought provoking questions and the last sentence ties it ...