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  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: When I Cry: Chpt. 1

    Hey there, Silver here with a review. You reviewed something of mine earlier, so I thought I'd return the favor. So here goes... Things I Liked: You write in a ...

    Sep 2, 2013
  • Short Story » General, General Re: At My Sister's

    Hey there, Silver here with a review. I think I'll just do a basic pro/con list for you. Pros: You obviously have a really engaging, unique writing style. I never ...

    Sep 1, 2013
  • Lyrics » General, General Re: Always Come Home

    Oooh, lyrics fun. :) Nice song you have here. You'll be my first review in a while, so sorry if it's a little rough! Anyway, I usually break works down ...

    Sep 1, 2013
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: A little Treat

    Hey there! Silver here with a review! Okay, let me just say this is a lovely little poem you have here; it definitely made me smile at the end. Anyway, ...

    Apr 17, 2013
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Teen Fiction Re: Heavy

    Ooh, spoken word, awesome! Alright, Silver here with a review. Powerful stuff here. But before I start let me just say that poetry is definitely not my strong suit, and ...

    Apr 17, 2013
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Culture Re: When We Give In

    Hi there! Silver here with a review. I really enjoyed reading your poem, very creative, but I think there are a few things you can do with the structure to ...

    Feb 17, 2013
  • Poetry » Romantic, General Re: Aphrodite's Song

    Hey there! Silver here with your review! Let me be honest with you, I'm not a big fan of love poems. In fact, I despise them. No offense to all ...

    Feb 14, 2013
  • Poetry » General, Romantic Re: Siberian Nights

    Hey there. Silver here with a review. Before I dive into it, let me just say I think this poem is pretty amazing, and I can tell already I'm going ...

    Feb 9, 2013
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Other Re: The Grim Reaper

    Hey, Silver here with a review! First of all, let me start by saying that I think this poem has a lot of potential. :) To make things easier, I'll ...

    Feb 6, 2013
  • Poetry » Spiritual, Fantasy Re: Elven Grief

    Hello there! Nice poem you have here. I hope you find my review helpful! :) Pros: You have managed to establish a very strong tone here, very whimsical, very magical. ...

    Jan 31, 2013
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: parade (16+)

    Hi Hannah! I have a lot to say about this poem so I'll go stanza by stanza. "i want to love a monk who blows smoke and crushes cigarettes on ...

    Jan 30, 2013
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Truth is, you should lie with me

    First off, wow, just wow. Okay, I am like in love with this poem.:) I think I'll start off with a pro/con list for this review. Pros: I love, love, ...

    Jan 20, 2013
  • Short Story » Realistic, Dramatic Re: Recyclables

    Hey there, looks like I might be one of your first reviewers, so I'll do my best. :) Pros: LOVE the word choice. It's really elegant and it brings so ...

    Jan 20, 2013
  • Short Story » Dramatic, Culture Re: Hotel California

    I like the song, and I like this piece of writing! It's very creative, and has a great mood. I like how you say "our little girl" and "our little ...

    Jan 14, 2013
  • Poetry » Romantic, Other Re: Origami

    This a very lovely, whimsical poem you've got here. I normally don't like poems or writings having to do with love, as they tend to be too mushy-gushy for my ...

    Jan 14, 2013


I love her dearly, but I can’t live with her for a day without feeling my whole life is wasting away.
— Miss Kenton, The Remains of the Day by Kazuo Ishiguro