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Re: When I Cry: Chpt. 1
Hey there, Silver here with a review. You reviewed something of mine earlier, so I thought I'd return the favor. So here goes... Things I Liked: You write in a ...
Sep 2, 2013 -
Re: At My Sister's
Hey there, Silver here with a review. I think I'll just do a basic pro/con list for you. Pros: You obviously have a really engaging, unique writing style. I never ...
Sep 1, 2013 -
Re: Always Come Home
Oooh, lyrics fun. :) Nice song you have here. You'll be my first review in a while, so sorry if it's a little rough! Anyway, I usually break works down ...
Sep 1, 2013 -
Re: A little Treat
Hey there! Silver here with a review! Okay, let me just say this is a lovely little poem you have here; it definitely made me smile at the end. Anyway, ...
Apr 17, 2013 -
Re: Heavy
Ooh, spoken word, awesome! Alright, Silver here with a review. Powerful stuff here. But before I start let me just say that poetry is definitely not my strong suit, and ...
Apr 17, 2013 -
Re: When We Give In
Hi there! Silver here with a review. I really enjoyed reading your poem, very creative, but I think there are a few things you can do with the structure to ...
Feb 17, 2013 -
Re: Aphrodite's Song
Hey there! Silver here with your review! Let me be honest with you, I'm not a big fan of love poems. In fact, I despise them. No offense to all ...
Feb 14, 2013 -
Re: Siberian Nights
Hey there. Silver here with a review. Before I dive into it, let me just say I think this poem is pretty amazing, and I can tell already I'm going ...
Feb 9, 2013 -
Re: The Grim Reaper
Hey, Silver here with a review! First of all, let me start by saying that I think this poem has a lot of potential. :) To make things easier, I'll ...
Feb 6, 2013 -
Re: Elven Grief
Hello there! Nice poem you have here. I hope you find my review helpful! :) Pros: You have managed to establish a very strong tone here, very whimsical, very magical. ...
Jan 31, 2013 -
Re: parade (16+)
Hi Hannah! I have a lot to say about this poem so I'll go stanza by stanza. "i want to love a monk who blows smoke and crushes cigarettes on ...
Jan 30, 2013 -
Re: Truth is, you should lie with me
First off, wow, just wow. Okay, I am like in love with this poem.:) I think I'll start off with a pro/con list for this review. Pros: I love, love, ...
Jan 20, 2013 -
Re: Recyclables
Hey there, looks like I might be one of your first reviewers, so I'll do my best. :) Pros: LOVE the word choice. It's really elegant and it brings so ...
Jan 20, 2013 -
Re: Hotel California
I like the song, and I like this piece of writing! It's very creative, and has a great mood. I like how you say "our little girl" and "our little ...
Jan 14, 2013 -
Re: Origami
This a very lovely, whimsical poem you've got here. I normally don't like poems or writings having to do with love, as they tend to be too mushy-gushy for my ...
Jan 14, 2013
