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I really liked this poem. The story behind it was very clear and sad. I'm sure a lot of people can relate this to one point in their life, as ...

Wow, I absolutely loved this poem! It was perfect (: I especially liked the repetition throughout the poem, it really strengthened it I thought. The imagery and emotion were both ...

Wow, great poem! You managed to capture so much emotion in such a short piece. Here are my suggestions and comments : If love had eyes , it wouldnt look ...

I loved this poem! I can easily relate to it. It was short and sweet :) I still think that you could perhaps add a little more to it. It ...

Ou, I liked this poem. It was definetly interesting. There were some parts when I was a little confused, but that's actually a good thing because it kept me guessing, ...

Awe, this is really good. (: You were able to show so much emotion, in such a short piece. Amazing! I just have two small suggestions for this last stanza: ...

Awe, I love this poem! I wish I could go back to when I was younger and everything was simplier... There weren't any errors or suggestsions that I could find, ...

I really liked the idea of the story, it was interesting. It actually kind of reminded me of the movie "I am Number Four", which is about a guy from ...

Well I'm not too sure how to critque lyrics, since I am not musically inclined. However, I did enjoy the lyrics. I think it could make a really good song. ...

Wow, I loved the poem :) There was some great imagery and symbolism in this poem. I couldn't find any corrections or suggestions. Well, actually I think that you could ...

I really enjoyed your poem! It was short and straight to the point. However, I agree with tydecker, that the last line kind of threw off the flow. The rest ...

Ahahahaha! I loved this poem! The rythmn and ryhmning were both amazing. I loved the story and idea behing it. It was cute and creative. I think it also shows ...

Ahahaha, this poem was really good! It was both funny and well-written. I know a guy that is kind of similar to this... he just loves causing conflict and being ...

Awe, this was so good! Very sad. I could definetly hear this as a ballad. There was a lot of great emotion here. My only suggestion would be to perhaps ...

Great poem! It was short and sweet (: This is definetly me, I can be really quiet or really loud and weird. Ahahahhaa. I think you got your idea across ...