silentwords

This was a really well-written poem. I especially liked the ending: Through it all I still cling to what is right, I know the fire will keep me warm even ...

This is a great poem with a good message. It was very sad. You told a good message and it was easy to sympathize with the girl. My only complaint ...

Great peom, it was short and sweet :) My only suggestion is that in the 3rd line, you get rid of the word "together". I think that it flows better ...

I really like the theme of the poem :) It's simple and well written. The only part that confused me was: Into mature's maze I'm not sure if you meant ...

This is a really well-written poem! I really enjoyed it. The flow was good except it was sort of interupted at these two parts: Your letting go of Me. Leagues ...

I'll be honest, I read this just because of the song. I absolutely love the song, it's so cute yet sad.

This poem was really soothing but with a dark feel to it. This is a unique combination, which I really enjoyed. There is some great imagery and vocab in this ...

This poem was incredible. I really enjoyed it! The only thing that annoyed me was when you would change the font around. I think that the first part in quotes ...

I really liked the way you made this poem rhyme. I personally just enjoy those types of poems better. I think that overall this was really good. It is short ...

Wow, this was really good! I loved your beggining and ending. It has a dark feeling to it, which I really liked. This is a common theme, especially amongst teenagers, ...

This poem is really good! As I was reading it, it made me feel sad, which is a good thing for you :P . It was a little vauge but ...