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"Cowards die a thousand times." "Ignorance is bliss." loved this part.

Keep billboards, it's familiar and works better for that reason than changing it.

Loved your poem. Unable to afford a break from the thoughts that live rent free with it Drop rent free, it's common to use it, but don't use it here ...

You should change billboards to something else. It doesn't match your extended metaphor but is a great line. This poem is so good by the way. I'd delete the rip ...

Very energetic. The short lines work well for that, and it did well for you. Red face line should be removed as well as the line that follows. It would ...

Da pacem Domine Loved that. Also learned the word attrition. Thank you. So, this poem is good, I liked it a lot. The betrayed line is really good, it's hard ...

Love this theme and style! So halloween. The repetition works well, gives a creepy feeling.

So raw, it feels like it might be lot of sperate poems, try cutting this up and putting it into like 10 poems. Good stuff though, love it.

Reserved because I accidently double posted. [/joke]

Such a good and skilled poem. Loved magenta hues violently. Great line. And your voice in this worked so well to be like let me tell you something, it was ...

The same things can feel like torn all in itself.