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Hello, shaniac here to review your piece! I like the vagueness at the beginning of this short story. It kind of shapes out the story better than I thought it ...

Hello, shaniac here to review your poem! I like the main idea you presented in this poem. Taking bits and pieces from it, I'm guessing that this poem is about ...

Hello, shaniac here to review your poem! I like the idea you have going on here. It is kind of relevant as school just got out and in two months, ...

Hello, shaniac here to review your poem! I like the message you are providing through this poem. There is a sort of tone of giving the true meaning of being ...

Hello, shaniac here to review your piece! You mentioned to me that I should try my hand at reviewing the rest of the pieces, so I am! In the next ...

Hello, shaniac here to review this chapter! The dialogue between the two characters, Xayln and Mamba, is a nice way of opening it. It is a nice transition in from ...

Hello, shaniac here to review your chapter! The beginning of this is very heartwarming and joyful because it is the children's birthday. The one thing that was slightly jarring to ...

Hello, shaniac here to review your piece! Right off the bat, the beginning really grips me. You show a character that is struggling under some dirt and nearing death as ...

Hello, shaniac here to review your piece! What caught my attention was the title of this piece. It really brings out the main conflict of what is going to happen, ...

Hello, shaniac here to review this piece! The beginning of the chapter, you start off with a character named Sena. You don't give any prior knowledge of who Sena might ...

Hello, shaniac here to review your piece! I like to begin by saying that entire piece kind of reminds me of like a show or voice over of some show, ...

Hello, shaniac here to review your piece! I'm really liking the beginning of this because you give out a nice description of the town that this novel is taking place. ...

Hello, shaniac here to review your poem! I'm really enjoying the bits of imagery you have swirling between the two years that this is happening. In the first bit, where ...

Hello, shaniac here to review your piece! In the beginning, I'm really enjoying how you bring out the character. You kind of show us that she doesn't want to live ...

Hello, shaniac here to review this poem! I like the idea you have going into this poem. The first few lines really bring out that emotion that the narrator feels ...