shaniac

Hello, shaniac here to review your piece! I really like how you open up this prologue with a question. Though, the point from what happens kind of drags away as ...

Hello, shaniac here to review your piece! Please note that I haven't read the previous chapters so correct me if I get anything wrong. I really like the opening of ...

Hello, shaniac here to review your poem! I kind of like the tone you are presenting in this poem. I haven't a lot of poems that are centered around wanting ...

Hello, shaniac here to review your piece! Usually, prologues, from the ones I've read, are a bit longer and give more of a background as to what will be happening ...

Hello, shaniac here to review your poem! This was a magnificent read. It was full of twists and turns and a lot of different messages that were scrabbled into each ...

Hello, shaniac here to review your poem! The title caught my attention as what I thought this poem was going to about the different fears attacking the narrator or something. ...

Hello, shaniac here to review your piece! Sorry, I'm kind of scatterbrained right now as I got back from a family gathering but I've wanted to review this since this ...

Hello, shaniac here to review your piece! I like this short story. It's full of humor and the two characters that you presented are full of life. It's a nice ...

Hello, shaniac here to review your poem! I really like the concept that you decided to use for this poem. I wrote a poem about time, as well, and I ...

Hello, shaniac here to review your piece! The beginning part of this part is kind of wordy and even though this is the third chapter, it doesn't really grab my ...

Hello, shaniac here to review your piece! The beginning of this chapter feels a bit awkward. I haven't read the previous chapters, but I feel like maybe you should open ...

Hello, shaniac here to review your piece! The title caught my attention into wanting to figure out more of what is going to happen. So, your main concept of having ...

Hello, shaniac here to review your piece! I like the idea that you have presented here and the idea about starting off with the narrator excited about going into a ...

Hello, shaniac here to review your piece! For someone who hasn't read the previous chapters, you've done a nice job of summarizing what has happened. I can say that I ...

Hello, shaniac here to review your poem! What caught my attention was the title of the poem, not because I have a sibling (I'm an only child xP) but because ...