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Thank you. :) It's hard to put your feeling into words... I think "we want to stay" doesn't fit as for the 2nd line "Waving from the distant." Imagine as ...

Hi, ancient. Thanks for your thorough review. I love to see reviews that are rebuking/encouraging. I'll consider everything you've said. :)

Hi, Waltz. :) I love your avatar. Thanks. Sometimes, No, I mean at most times, I struggle to write what I really feel and I find them hard to express.

Hi, midnight. :) Yah. It's a short one. Uhm... How I wish I could write down all the words in my head. :(

Hi, Fallen. Happy holidays. :) Thanks for the review. Uhm... 'bout the caps, I really do think that's the proper way.(Correct me if I'm wrong. :)) I look forward to ...

Thanks for the honest review. You might want to exchange reviews. Visit my profile. :)

Quite a tragedy. I agree with the first review. It's lacking stories. I would love to see more emphasised lines rather than repeated.

Hi, Iggy! Thanks for the review. It's just my way of writing poetry. (I'm not that really good.) I look forward to learning.... :)

I feel your sympathy, Luna. Things do happen as part of life, but that doesn't mean we have to giveup. I'm happy to know that someone can relate. Thank you ...

Hi, Ponyz! Thanks for the review. I appreciate your sincerity; and yeah, I look forward to posting some more. We can exchange reviews. :)

Thank you so much. I really appreciate it. It's just something that even I can't elaborate. P.S. I'll consider everything you've said. :)

Glad to have somebody that appreciates my work. Thanks wordsandwisdom. Thanks for the review. :)

Hey. That was nice. Somehow I can relate to that. I have a poem similar to this. I swear! :) It was like someone is trying to rebuild something(probably a ...

Hahaha. I can't stop laughing! The title speaks the the story itself! Hahahaha. Nice one! I'm no good in reviewing but I can relate to this and I cant stop ...

I didn't want the breaking of the lines until I noticed that it was a song. Your words aren't deep enough but I would love to hear it. Prompt me ...