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This was a very interesting piece! I tried to draw my eyes from it but found I could not stop reading! The first little nitpick I found was the repetitive ...

Hello, I am here for a review :) These are all of the nitpicks I found (and please note that I am VE-EH-RY picky :P!) " "Thanks[,]" I muttered as ...

Hello, I'm sbf1102, here for a review :) First of all, I loved the beginning of the story; the setting and characters in this prologue are described wonderfully. I particularly ...

" [ The ] car sounds like a skateboard and [ ] is crunching the leaves and crunching itself [ T ]hat's just what I hear [ , ] though ...

This was really entertaining! ( :-) ) "Start You wake up in a bed [ , ] but it's not your bed. You have no idea where you are [ ...

Wow. Let me just say, I've had only a partial share of the trouble you've gone through in your life, and I'm sure you, like me, do NOT at ALL ...

This sounds really awesome. :) I like the suspense, the fond storytelling, and althought most graduation stories seem quite cliché, I'm excited for yours ( did I spell cliché right? ...

Omgg! I loved this poem!

Nice poem! Here's a few tips: "Whenever I look up to glance at him, I suck in my breath, my heart leaps to my mouth, I get butterflies in my ...

OMG I AM LAUGHING MY HEAD OFF! Okay, the first nitpick I found was this: "Where the new aspiring , beautiful, and talented new talk show host of the decade ...

Really awesome! I loved the flow in your poem. Very free - style --- a PERFECT beginning to your poem - writing career! One thing though: I would add a ...

Really cool story! So, I did find a few nitpicks almost immediately into the story. :( " I can't even be called a girl, I think. More like a scientific ...

This is amazing!! :o I am in awe of your surpeme SORRY I'M A SUCKY TERRIBLE SPELLER XD surpreme UGH supreme. There I got it! Lol :P. Anyway I respect ...

As stated before, as diminuitive as its size is, the poem truly IS read better at a slower pace. You drew sooo much emotion out of the readers without using ...

Great poem! I really enjoyed your rhyming flow. I found a very minuscule amount of nitpicks in this excellent piece. In the following statement: "My love by my side, there's ...