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It gives me joy that you liked it. Thanks for the encouraging words.

Thanks a lot Anna for your kind words. It would surely provide me the fillip to delve deep into this hitherto unexplored territory of poetry. Thanks.

Thanks a lot for your encouragement. You may go through couple of poems that I have posted here if you feel like it. Thank you once again for your appreciation ...

Sad yet poignant. This subject matter of promise, followed by heartbreak provides immense potential to work on. You have done justice to it with your play of words. I mean ...

Good one. The dialogues and conversations bring out the helplessness and longing very well. It's soulful. I especially liked the lines Peace........ She brings me inspiration in her being, serenity ...

Sad yet poignant. This subject matter of promise, followed by heartbreak provides immense potential to work on. You have done justice to it with your play of words. I mean ...

Thanks a lot Anna for your positive review. I am grateful and humbled. Yes, I am a self-confessed novice as far as rhyming is concerned. I also follow it difficult ...

Thanks a lot for the review and suggestions. I will try to rewrite it accordingly. Thanks.

Thanks a lot Nymix for the kind review. I would, of course, like to have your suggestions and personal insights, which I believe, would surely enrich the piece. So, please ...

Superb way to put forth the correct definition of the woman's body - at least the ephemeral quality of it. Even if you think it's about somebody who is not ...

Really impressive. Written in the first person, it encases the inner feeling well. Like some of your other poems, I enjoyed this one as well. Keep writing.

I agree with Blackwood that the title could have been more appealing down. But overall, I like the first person narration. The flow is also good. A good one.

The rhyming is rhythmically appealing. My favourite line is Close your eyes as the shimmer of a setting sun warms your skin and bronzes your golden grin. This especially impressed ...

Simple and lucid. Rhyming is also okay. So, is the ethos behind it. In my opinion, it's a cute little poem.

The flow of the poem is smooth and effortless. You have been able to pass across the message with minimum words. This shows your hold over the choice of words. ...