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  • Poetry » General, Literature Re: Red

    the poem begins with a genral note where you describe the fuctions and objects of red color. but as the climax comes we are unpredictably told about the main theme ...

    May 25, 2015
  • Poetry » Narrative, Dramatic Re: Sunday

    this poem is great, i too have such childish dream on sundays. sundays are really the sun's day or the day of light brightlight of our life. the childish way ...

    May 22, 2015
  • Poetry » Romantic, Other Re: The suitors of the fair maiden

    the theme of this poem is very good . no one is actually perfect in this world and if anyone has to find someone so perfect then she has to ...

    May 22, 2015
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Why?

    this is another theme which is becoming popular day by our country one gay has published a matrimonial add. the way u question this society that why it calls one ...

    May 21, 2015
  • Poetry » Spiritual, Satire Re: Adam's apple

    this poem is not bad one but too short for a reveiw. you could have given somthing for urs poem, somthing from the paradise lost.adam and eve fighting eating apple ...

    May 21, 2015
  • Poetry » General, General Re: As Cold as Ice

    Although this is not a poem but i like the idea seems as the biography of one soul which had commited suicide for being betrayed by her lover. the poem ...

    May 20, 2015
  • Script » Fantasy, Spiritual Re: The Phoenix

    this poem is vry good one and i love he way u picked up the mythical character pheonix . i luv the creature and the technique u applied to represent ...

    May 18, 2015
  • Poetry » General, General Re: To Envy Or Not To Envy

    This poem is very good the beginning is very good one with natural objects as clouds and sun rays. then the climax opens that are the poets the ones to ...

    May 18, 2015
  • Lyrics » Lyrical, Dramatic Re: Best Buddies to the End

    Lovely poem. i had myself separated from my best freind as she changed her school. in the second line u wrote many deep,deep scars this defines the scar of his ...

    Apr 20, 2015
  • Art » Other, Realistic Re: My Melancholy

    HI IVERLADY. this poem is an reflective poem which actually reflcts one's changes and stone harted ness. IN THE NARRATION I FOUND THAT TE LADY CANNOT Boldly accept the fact ...

    Apr 20, 2015
  • Poetry » Horror, Dramatic Re: Sometimes

    This is too violent a poem. i think that this should be an autobiography of an extremely depressd man. however the rash tone of narrating is what i admire in ...

    Apr 20, 2015
  • Short Story » Fantasy, Romantic Re: Ideal illusion

    I LOVE IT ! iT SHOULD HAVE BEEN TALE OF A HEART BROKEN Man. The man is chanting sweet romantic rhymes for her lady love who had atleast dumped her ...

    Apr 20, 2015
  • Short Story » Mystery / Suspense, Supernatural Re: The Shadow Beast

    I found it less scary and much sweeter. Threr's no problem actually.You have written a morale story instead which says that one should not deny their own cousins. The day ...

    Apr 20, 2015
  • Short Story » Fantasy, General Re: The Dark Crystal Part 1

    The theme of the story is had the essence of mystery and adventure however it coul not create the excitement and thrill which this type of stories should generally create.this ...

    Apr 20, 2015
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: I'm Going to Apologize to Anyone who Reads This

    If i am not wrong then this poem actually describes the state of new love fron male's side.He wants to do many creative acts to impress his lover.He wants to ...

    Apr 20, 2015


When a flower doesn't bloom, you fix the environment in which it grows, not the flower.
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