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Re: Her Last Dream
This is a very good romantic melancholic poem. i like the way u used rhyme at some points of the poem. i myself had written many poem on love and ...
Jul 5, 2015 -
Re: Our Life
the poem is very good specially the begining is very good. the best thing i felt is that u brought out the poem as a story with curious questions and ...
Jul 4, 2015 -
Re: My Sister Gives me Red Roses
its soo oooo good and interesting poem. it is a ballad kind of poem which tells a story and should be accompanied by thrilling music. i have become a fan ...
Jul 1, 2015 -
Re: Does it Bother You? (Edited)
this poem had emerged because of the us govt. announced gay marriage legal. have i got it correct!i love the questioning pattern does it bother u. this way of questiong ...
Jul 1, 2015 -
Re: Porcelain
i like the shape u gave to the relationship .truly all the fake relationship should scatter o0n the carpet of time. they are fragile as porecelain and could easily be ...
Jun 28, 2015 -
Re: Worry Lights
THIS poem is a good one . i like he way u put thew lights in shape of faries which will garden the plants.then you say u are in the ...
Jun 28, 2015 -
Re: bleeding sin
do there anything sin or bliss for mosquito? is there any hell or heaven for mosquito. according to me they o in hell to make the place more difficult for ...
Jun 28, 2015 -
Re: A Poem About Newton's Laws
i love the theme of the poem. i actually say that newton and archimedes are the cleverest aqnd luckiest man because they were the one who were casually spending there ...
Jun 28, 2015 -
Re: "A Billion Ways to Live"
the first thing is that the verses are not linked it does not seem from the lyrics that the verses belong to same song. first part seems you are describing ...
Jun 15, 2015 -
Re: My spectrum
this poem has well described the spreading of the rays of sun.the point that you describe that the golden rays spred over all o the earth. your tools were scattered. ...
Jun 15, 2015 -
Re: You Can Write Haikus
i know about haiku. it is a typical japanese style of poetry which has three lines in each stanza.i like hat u are promoting haikus. i luv haiku m but ...
Jun 12, 2015 -
Re: For You
the blanket is enough ! hh just joking. it was a paragraph not a poem. first the line spacing is wrong. then u specified it as poem. i was misleaden ...
Jun 10, 2015 -
Re: My Secret Love
this poem truly describes love from the sight of sm1 who is not bold enough to say hat he/she is in love. or it may be that love had made ...
Jun 10, 2015 -
Re: when you cant understand the word omnipresent
i cannot understand the true meaning of the poem. was it based on love and separation. the spacings in the poem was not correct at least i felt so. its ...
Jun 9, 2015 -
Re: Facing Fear
i like the theme of the poem. u personified the vice fear all through out the poem. u showed that fear creeps deep in our heart and destroys all good ...
Jun 8, 2015
