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Re: Hail
Hello, Ruby here for a review! Wow, this poem is amazing. Honestly, this could be published somewhere, or if you write more you could collect them into a book and ...
Nov 29, 2015 -
Re: Adrift on Blue
Hello, Ruby here for a review of this absolutely beautiful piece :) First off, I haven't read many poems that were all italicized. I don't think it would work with ...
Nov 29, 2015 -
Re: A Waste of a Life.
Hi, Ruby here for a quick little review on this, because it made me laugh. Well, to start off I was a bit worried when I saw the title- it ...
Nov 29, 2015 -
Re: Scenes from Downtown, 2015.
Hi, Ruby here for a review! This is a really well thought out piece. I am amazed you managed to fit such a big message into just 6 short lines- ...
Nov 29, 2015 -
Re: Narcissus Betrothal
Hi, Ruby here for a review! Wow, this poem is AMAZING! Really, one of the best I've read here so far! I was drawn in by the title- I love ...
Nov 29, 2015 -
Re: changing or falling, your choice
Hi, Ruby here for a review! :) You did a really good job conveying the mood that accompanies the message in this poem. Such a dark, beautiful topic: wanting to ...
Nov 29, 2015 -
Re: Typhon
Hi, Ruby here for a quick review! Okay, so to begin the subject of this poem drew me in right off the bat, as a lover of all things Mythology. ...
Nov 29, 2015 -
Re: Heart of Gold
Hi, Ruby here for a review (: Okay so to start, I thought the subject of these lyrics was intriguing and not something I've seen a lot of writing about: ...
Nov 29, 2015 -
Re: Slave Girl
Hi, Ruby here for a review of this AMAZING poem! I really thought the structure of this poem was very interesting. Metaphors, when done right, can convey such a strong ...
Nov 29, 2015 -
Re: oh how love can sting like a wound
Hi, I'm Ruby here to review :) I thought the idea for this poem was interesting, and the title drew me into reading it. It's very relatable, as everyone has ...
Nov 8, 2015 -
Re: Free
Hello, it's Ruby, just popping in for a review! So just wanted to begin with complimenting the imagery in this piece. Many of the stanzas gave images that really overall ...
Nov 7, 2015 -
Re: Welcome to America
Wow, I agree with/love this. I live in America too, and would have to say that these are the issues I think about on an almost daily basis. I like ...
Nov 5, 2015 -
Re: If water were hate
Hi, it's Ruby, just wanted to say I really enjoyed this poem! The concept in itself is a really good one- using something one influential force of nature to represent ...
Nov 5, 2015