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Re: A Child's March
Happy Thursday! I hope you're doing great today. :D You did an awesome job with your message here. It's so true. Children are given such high expectations because they have ...
Jan 25, 2018 -
Re: ADFA in 300 words
Hi thundereagle! I believe this will be a rather short review, considering this is a rather short piece, so without further ado, let's jump right in. The first thing that ...
Jan 25, 2018 -
Re: Prologue
Hi WanderlustStardust! I'm just rosette, sliding in for a quick review. (By the way: what a fun username!) I'm super happy to see you're beginning your own novel - that's ...
Jan 25, 2018 -
Re: Driving Lesson
Hey, it's me again! xD I don't even know what to say. This was rather amusing. I'm just going to praise God for not giving me a driving instructor like ...
Jan 24, 2018 -
Re: Artifacts/Broken Pottery
Hello! :) Now you've labeled this as poetry, though it does seem more like a song. Your rhyming is fantastic, and the imagery here (butterscotch, broken pottery, and pills) is ...
Jan 23, 2018 -
Re: Gilbert's Second Interview With God
Hello Radrook! I read the first interview of this story, but I actually decided to review this second part. I find the whole idea of a mere, finite being interviewing ...
Jan 23, 2018 -
Re: The Ripple in Our Lives
Hello Gina! I hope you're doing great. :) Now this is quite dramatic. But Anna-Marie's emotions are so strong and effective, the drama doesn't feel synthetic or forced. It all ...
Jan 23, 2018 -
Re: Our Society of Ridicule
I LOVE THIS It's so horribly true, and I'm so sick of the ridicule and hate consuming everyone. You make mention of some valid points in here, which I really ...
Jan 20, 2018 -
Re: Sync
Hi EKK15! This is an interesting poem you have brought to us. I like the whole idea of sync, and how it is compared to a dance. I interpreted it ...
Jan 20, 2018 -
Re: Nothing: Delayed (5)
Hello there! I've noticed this has been sitting in the Green Room for much too long now, therefore I am here to kick it out for you. :) I don't ...
Jan 20, 2018 -
Re: Adam Recalls
Hello Radrook! I'm honestly so glad most - if not all - of the poems you share on here have strong Christian themes. I think it's absolutely beautiful, and it's ...
Jan 19, 2018 -
Re: Yearning
Hello Rascalover! I hope you're doing great today. I find this poem fascinating. Perhaps because I can relate. I'm not sure if you intend for it be sad or not, ...
Jan 18, 2018 -
Re: Durante Vita
Hello there, Alexey! Firstly, allow me to say Thank You! It's rare to see Historical Fiction on this site, which is really quite a shame, but one reason why I ...
Jan 17, 2018 -
Re: Hell or High Water (Chapter 8.3)
Hi scribbles! Can you tell me your secret to popping out these chapters so fast and quick? Because mine take forever for me to publish. xD So, I'm going to ...
Jan 17, 2018 -
Re: Oops
Hey SpaceSnickerdoodle! I'm here to kick this out of the Green Room, but as the reviewer below me said this truly is easy points for someone to review. Were you ...
Jan 11, 2018
