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hey there! chikara pointed out a few grammatical errors in here, so I will focus on the overall storyline. I have to say I was not expecting that ending! It ...

Hey there! I saw you mentioned this was a dream you had, so that cleared some things up for me! The story was abrupt, vague, and confusing, similar to a ...

Hello & Happy New Year! I'm not the biggest fan of fantasy, but I enjoyed reading through most of this. What initially caught my interest was the narrator having long, ...

Hey there! I hope you're doing well. I didn't want to jump into chapter 2 without any context, so I quickly read your first chapter. My first impression was that ...

Hi mckinley, Welcome to YWS! I know I'm a little late, but I hope you'll forgive me. Overall, I think this was structured nicely. The narrator felt hopeless and lost ...

Hey there :] So this almost felt like a philosophical read. The writer of this entry is obviously not a shallow individual but a perceptive one. I did go back ...

Hey, hey, how's it going? It's pretty rare to see actual pictures in the Green Room, which may or may not be why I dropped in. :p They're lovely pictures, ...

Hey, Honora! Okay, okay, I really like this. I'm not a fan of fantasy tales or anything similar to them, but for some reason, I'm getting Shannon Hale vibes while ...

Hey fantascifi66! Hope you're doing well. :D I read the first chapter of this novel, so I have a bit of a background. It seems like quite an interesting story. ...

Hi Blou. :] I like your style of writing here - it's the first thing I noticed as I was reading. You're not simplistic but you're not complicated. You have ...

Hi there! I hope you're doing well. This was certainly a cute little story, and while I kind of want to critique it, I also like it how it is. ...

Hey, EternalRain! :D I've been seeing this hanging out in the GR for a while, so I thought I'd swoop in and give it a review. :p Not that there ...

I saw Avengers in the title and freaked. No lie. Marvel is the best . So, naturally, I had to slide in for a review. ;p First off, first off: ...

Hey there, Liberty! :D I hope you're doing well today, and I hope those Fairy Dairy entries are moving along smoothly. ;) I saw you had this story sitting in ...

Hey, bigsisfarmer! :D I reviewed the chapter previous to this one, though I'm not sure if you remember me. Either way, I'll jump right in. Specifics: No guards were in ...