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very interesting. There is a lot you could do with this. I am excited to see where you take this. I absolutely adore the name Samaira. It's unique and extremely ...

FAN-FREAKING-TASTIC. You have a wonderful voice and instantly hooked me on this storyline. Instantly. One of the best things I have read on here in a long long long time. ...

Okay, the title for this is actually awesome. And I enjoy it, although I don't exactly understand its relevance to the story. I like that you started this out-- and ...

I adore this with every inch of my being. This is lyrical, and romantic, and beautiful, and mysterious. It is also very heartbreaking. In the end it actually made me ...

The first thing that catches my eye is the way you explain everything in this world. I feel like you have put an immense amount of thought into it. I ...

Oh my goodness. This is smart and funny and believable. I laughed. This is very creative and I really enjoy when people write from the perspective of inanimate objects. I ...

This is good. It drew me in from the minute I started reading it. I am very anxious to read more. I was surprised when you mentioned Hedwig being a ...

Ahhhhhhhhhh. This is very eerie and ominous. I love it. You wrote this very well and it is very descriptive and strong and visually stimulating, based on your descriptions The ...

Please tell me there is more to this and you are writing more? Because it is a necessity. Abigail seems cute, and I like how you described her. I'd like ...

Oh goodness. I wish I had a lot to say about this, but alas there is not much to say. This did make me chuckle. Briefly. This is purposely bad, ...

Despite the few spelling mistakes and a few words that shouldn't be there, this was very good. I enjoy the rhyming. I recommend breaking it up into stanzas to ease ...

Okay. I am going to review this paragraph by paragraph. I still haven't figured out how to do the whole quoting thing, so bear with me. Paragraph 1: I like ...

This is my favorite one of your pieces so far. Especially the last two stanzas. Woah. I felt things very strongly while reading this. I will always appreciate the broken ...

I really enjoy this piece as well. You are a very well-written poet. I am going to start a literature class in the fall, and so I am trying to ...

This is very powerful and I enjoyed it immensely. There are a few things I think you could improve on. There are a few times where reading it out loud, ...