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Thanks. I do think in the end, when they became friends, I was just trying to wrap up the story quickly because I wasn't sure how to end it. Thanks ...

I took the message that humans can get lost in things if they're not careful- that we always have to focus on what we want and what's best for us.

well it's all kind of a preview or whatever- information is left out purposely, to be revealed later if I keep writing this or not. thanks for your review!

you're still a turd

I'd rather keep that one private...

totes, bro

I'm thinking more of the ADD line of fictional thoughts I have a lot. Like I'll feel a soft fabric at Craft Central, and my mind will go catapulting into ...

Cool- I'll definitely read them!

awesome. I really love this.

#howmanyyearsdidittakeyou

Ok, so, I really can't find anything I don't like about this. It's interesting, and I'm excited to read more from this. This prologue had my attention the entire time. ...

haha ok

Awesome! I do very much like this. (awesome grammar there) Just wondering if you wrote this based off emotions, or it's just a thing that came to mind... good job. ...

okay that makes sense. Like I said, it could just be my funky brain...

*just kidding* :)