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rishabh

rishabh

  • Poetry » Other, General Re: Shattered Heart

    wow! i like ur work wat a rhyming sense u have! its' a grt stuff! ur questionnaire is the awesome part of this stuff! u asked tough questions! i am ...

    Jun 29, 2013
  • Poetry » Romantic, Lyrical Re: Evermore

    wow! what a grt stuff! it is treasure which i got while reading! oh my god i have a wonderful day today i am reviewing so many grt poems from ...

    Jun 28, 2013
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Marlie

    well, it is very sentimental poem but very nice as well. ur creation is marvella.......ur stanzas are well built, the whole structure was awesome. ur rhyming scheme is also nice ...

    Jun 28, 2013
  • Poetry » Romantic, Dramatic Re: Fragments of Feelings

    this poem is really nice i like it. well this line is kinda bore! so i will tell u a bit more about ur writing! this is marvella! means marvellous. ...

    Jun 28, 2013
  • Poetry » Romantic, Dramatic Re: Thought It Was True

    "You thought I was true." in ur first stanza this line is bit incorrect as it should be " you thought it was true." well it is ur friend's poem ...

    Jun 28, 2013
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Streetlight

    is this poem is complete? this question revolves in my think tank while scanning ur poem. starting is nice but at the bottom the feel of a poem lost. i ...

    Jun 28, 2013
  • Short Story » Narrative, Dramatic Re: Eric I hope you knew

    sorry for ur loss, pal! i know how it feels when ur friend whether a girl or a boy went so far, and u feel helpless. the same feelin i ...

    Jun 28, 2013
  • Short Story » Other, General Re: Writers Block

    I LIKE this piece coz it gave me the exact feelin as i had once when i was working on my first book(which is finally publishing in july '13). the ...

    Jun 27, 2013
  • Article / Essay » Realistic, General Re: Life !

    it is a magnificent work! but less! expand it and conquer the stage mate! ur work is praise-worthy plus unique! write more i want to see ur length! life is ...

    Jun 26, 2013
  • Article / Essay » General, General Re: Digitization- a Boon?

    this peice of work is good! ur way of thinkin towards techno stuff is awesome! in this essay u added everything including ur personal life! in my opinion digitization has ...

    Jun 26, 2013
  • Short Story » Romantic, Realistic Re: Love Never Changes

    ur work is nice. it is very similar to one book "gay- a word for happiness"( not in context of story). the story is unique plus very indian. being an ...

    Jun 26, 2013
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Death do us part

    ur poem is li'l depressive but a lot impressive! some minor grammatical mistakes are there but i neglected 'em coz i loved ur flow! ur rhyming scheme is also good! ...

    Jun 25, 2013
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Narrative Re: Perilous Technology

    ur piece of work is trendy! it's of neolithic age! in ur writing , u hv defined a new age of writing! it is very interesting. ur writing is unique ...

    Jun 25, 2013
  • Poetry » Horror, General Re: blood on my tombstone

    wow...........it's a nicely constructed poem but will you re-design it in a poetic way. i mean it seems as if it's a story despite of poem. the grammer is good, ...

    Jun 25, 2013
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: The Shadow

    "The Shadow will always narrator this story, alongside his brother. And just so you know, looks can be deceiving." re-write these sentences as : "the shadow will always narrate this ...

    Jun 25, 2013


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