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Re: Demon
Ok ,rikki here for a brief review for your poem. The structure of the poem looks good and quite easy to follow as well. Well written in the form of ...
Apr 4, 2014 -
Re: i-m-p-o-s-s-i-b-l-e
Ok ,rikki here for a small review of your short and sweet composition. This looks like as if you along with one of your affectionate one wishes to escape to ...
Apr 4, 2014 -
Re: A Ripple Effect
Ok ,rikki here for a small review. I hope Josh is someone you love and most affectionate to you. Coming back initially I thought it to something about Ripples only ...
Apr 3, 2014 -
Re: Conform
Hi , rikki for a short review of your poetic piece. This is quite a long composition and throws light on conformity to standard rules and regulations laid out by ...
Apr 3, 2014 -
Re: Strength
This is inspiring to say the least. Though not very rhythmic but flows well. These are some of the well written lines " I am stronger Than your hands on ...
Mar 30, 2014 -
Re: Black Hearts
It seems as if you are hurt emotionally and expressing dislike for any trickster. The flow of the theme is good, in fact nice. Believe me I like poems on ...
Mar 29, 2014 -
Re: Wastelands: After The Flash (An introduction for an upcoming book)
Hi @EmeraldLinks Nice and decent looking portray of something viably interesting to come ahead. I assume you are a very yyoung writer and have something interesting to share. But it ...
Mar 29, 2014 -
Re: I can't stop it
Ok, rikki here for a brief review. This poem is short,small and sweet. This could be read painlessly without any jargon within five minutes or less. Is this poem written ...
Mar 28, 2014 -
Re: Love is Logical
Hi,rikki for a review. This is a nice piece of poetry written. It is very light hearted and somewhat true considering the unfaithful nature of people nowadays. It could really ...
Jan 10, 2014 -
Re: A land not so far away
Hi , rikki here for a small review. This is not a very big poem so I read the entire poetry in a cool and relaxed manner. " The land ...
Jan 7, 2014 -
Re: Opposites Attract
Ok, rikki here for a review to your piece of composition. I really liked the opening lines as they seem to be so true. We may actually do it in ...
Jan 6, 2014 -
Re: You Can't Change the Beginning or Ending
Hi,rikki here for a short review to your short composition. The poetry piece is too small to comment much or find much flaws. It is more like a statement that ...
Jan 6, 2014 -
Re: Halcyon days
Hi,Rikki for a small and very brief review to a very small poetry. This is a three lines poem which is more like a statement. " balanced on tree tops ...
Jan 3, 2014 -
Re: Do we Know?
Hi rikki for a small review. I skimmed through your poetry. It is full of if-else conditions. I had to say I liked a few lines like these ones:- " ...
Dec 31, 2013 -
Re: Writing by Candle
Hi rikki here for a review. This piece of poetry is very very short. " Backlit by a candle he wrote his scribe Undoing the knotted roper lying inside " ...
Dec 31, 2013
