rhiasofia

Sorry, my response was very curt. It was first thing in the morning, so I was cranky. I do appreciate you taking the time to review. By STRANDS OF SEA, ...

its poetry. You use figurative language.

Short, sweet, and to the point. Best response, for sure.

Just gonna toss this out there, it is properly spelled Haiku. Not hayaku. Hayaku isn't a word.

Thank you so much, it means so much to here that someone likes it, it was definitely a more personal piece, which made me uncertain to share it. I don't ...

Thanks for the time you took to review, I appreciate it. I'm glad that you like it/parts of it, and those are good critiques that I will definitely keep in ...

No, you didn't offend me, I was just confused. I thought maybe it was a technical thing that the website messed up. Cause it seemed like that was a comment ...

I'm really glad that I'm able to write something that other people can feel and relate to as much as me. That is the best kind of compliment I could ...

Hmmm, I think that this comment is supposed to be on a different poem...technical issues? Cause it definitely doesn't describe mine, nor did Green Tulip, nor fictional comment on this ...

Thanks, for the welcome and the nice review. Yes, it is personal, pretty much all of my poems are. That's why I chose the 3, 5 syllable pace, there's 5 ...

Well, knowing that, you're really doing well! It sounded more like it was rushed, I wouldn't have thought it was a language problem. You're doing really well in that case, ...

Thank you so much!

Well, I liked the way you ended with just two lines, and they were two of my favorite lines. I just felt that I needed to come up with something ...

Thank you!

Thank you so much! I will try to work on wording it so it flows a bit better, definitely. I'm glad you got the theme :)