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Hello, rhia here to review! For all that you seem to hate poetry here, most of this was written pretty well. I do have some technical issues. There were some ...

Hello, rhia here to review! I really like the story here, but I think you could definitely work on the writing itself. I'll give you some suggestions to, hopefully, help ...

Hello, Rhia here to review! Suggestions first) My body is black and blue, and then my vision is red. I suggest cutting out the bolded part. It would flow a ...

Hey, rhia here to review I'll just point out two little nitpicks first: 1) What if the burn is really just your inner pain being released. You worded this as ...

Hello, rhia here to review! Suggestions first: you would find a parasite, yellow, wriggling, and attached to my stomach. I recommend losing the "and" on the last line. I feel ...

Hey there, rhia here! And I do some things That doesn't make me proud. Subject verb agreement problem here. Either "I do something that doesn't make me proud" or "I ...

Hello, rhia here! I like this a lot, but I'm going to do some edit and suggesting first. Mostly just little nitpicks. I was reading Catcher in The rye, Should ...

Hmm. So, since you asked, I decided I would research definitions of marriage. Funny, how most never used the term "husband" and "wife", but rather "spouses". Those that did have ...

Hello, Becca! I really like this, and definitely see you in it, you and your busy, non-sleeping self. I've read over this a few times now, because it's really interesting. ...

Hello, rhia here! I think I've read all of your poems, and I just never review them because I just don't ever feel fit to. They're always too good for ...

Hello, rhia here! I was just wondering, is "piece of mind" a typo meant to be "peace" of mind? Or was that just a clever play on words? I'm just ...

Hello, Rhia here! I really like the stream of conscience, one thought after another, rush for words feeling I get when reading this, maybe cause I often find myself writing ...

Hello, rhia here to review this. Alright, I'm going to go with my dislikes first, which was mostly one big thing. You obviously put in the effort to rhyme, but ...

Hello! As I haven't been following this, I'm going to review mostly just from a grammar editing point of view, etc. Denny dodged the incoming ball letting it ricochet off ...

Hello, Rhia here to review! Nitpicks first: You spinned a web of lies so thick, spinned should be spun But now on your thrown of lies, It's spelled "throne", not ...