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This is really interesting. I loved the language you used in the beginning. It all felt really personal, and I really liked the portrayal of the main character. It was ...

SQUEEEEEEEEEEEEEE! SO CUTE! Awww, why hasn't anyone reviewed this yet? Are there no Whovians here?!? Blasphemy, I tell you. Okay, this is some pretty cute fanfiction. I really need to ...

Hey Lucrezia! Rhia here to review. You really impress me with the level of personality you put into your characters. Usually, that's hard with shorts, so I commend you on ...

I really like the story being told here. It's very sweet, very touching, and pretty original. However, I think you use a bit too much dialogue. In the short story ...

Hey there! Rhia here to review. Okay, I'm going to go through and edit some technical stuff. I can feel my heart pounding against my chest when an eruption of ...

Hey Strange! Rhia here to review. The title really says it all. It really drew me to read it, so good job there. Obviously, there isn't a whole lot for ...

Awww! That's just the first thing that hit me, was awww. But gosh, can I relate. I had a guy I liked since I was a little bitty 6th grader. ...

Well, I definitely like it a lot better after reading the dedication. It comes across as so much more meaningful and thoughtful, though I'm so sorry for everyone's loss. Saying ...

I really like this. So many times I've read poems comparing love to light, so I like that this one is doing the opposite. You simply seem to covet sunshine ...

I'm really confused as to why this poem has but one like, and but one comment. Have we lost sight of what constitutes as good poetry, as things worthy of ...

Gorgeous. Simply stunning. You painted, pun intended ;), such lovely imagery. I love the brevity, which is so sweet and short, yet filled to the brim with emotion. "How monochromatic ...

Hey, rhiasofia here to review this most interesting piece. Okay, since I have to have some kind of constructive criticism, despite the fact that I love this, I'm going to ...

Hey there, rhiasofia here to review. First things first, you should always capitalize I's, especially with a piece like this. Sometimes, for more stream-of-consciousness, nonsense pieces focused on wh

Oooh, a serious man-eater. Very fun, I liked that it was told from her perspective so that you could hear all her annoyance, all the malice. Then again, I suppose ...

This is really interesting and sad. I think it holds a lot of opportunity, to tell about the family before the "death", the run-away family's life. The writing itself could ...