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Hey there, June, Rhia here to review. I'll point out nitpicks that I notice as I read through the first time to get started: The only thing that might kill ...

Monsters, Monsters. So nice to see something of yours around, I'll do my best to help you out with a review. Alright, first thing that caught me was the rhyme ...

Hey there! I'll go ahead and review this for you. It's pretty short and, in my opinion, already rather a good poem, but I'll still give it a shot. I ...

Hey there! First off, welcome to YWS. Hopefully you're liking it here, and if you have any questions or anything, feel free to message me or leave a little note ...

Tigga, it's Rhia here to do some reviewing. It might be tough to get a whole review in for this, but anything to clear the green room. I really want ...

Hey there, Rhia here to review! Your title drew me in right away, and I think that you managed to keep my interest throughout the poem, despite it being rather ...

Hello, Gaki! First off, welcome to YWS! If you have any questions or whatnot, feel free to message me or leave a note on my wall, I can try to ...

LadySpark! Good day to you. I'll go ahead and try to give you some semblance of a review on this bad-boy since it is still going without it. I'll do ...

Hey there, Pomp! I usually really love your poems and can find very little to critique, but I hate seeing you reviewless so I'll do my best. I'll probably just ...

Writer, the first word Lovely to see you deary, lets get some reviewing done here, starting with critique. Capitalization stuck out to me. The first three stanzas have capitalization only ...

Fortis, It has been quite some time since I've written a review, as senior year has been eating me alive, so I will try my best to do this well. ...

Hello, rhia here to review the poem I pulled from the wizard's hat. I'll start with nitpicks. First, the title. Usually all the words are capitalized in a title, but ...

Hello there, rhia here to review this, since it is still unreviewed. Before I start, I'm going to tell you that I haven't been following this series of shorts. With ...

Hello, Lord Greenleaf, Rhia here to review me some poetry! Alright, nitpicks first: with my mouth sewed shut, Grammar lesson time! Alrighty. Although sewed is technically a past participle of ...

Hey, timmyjake! Since this is still reviewless, I thought I'd return the favor and do a bit of reviewing for you! Let's see what I can come up with. the ...