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Tigga, it's Rhia here to do some reviewing.
It might be tough to get a whole review in for this, but anything to clear the green room. I really want to post some work, but not for 500 points.
The position of the type on the page seemed potentially significant. With space left above and below it, it felt like you were waiting to say it. It captured some hesitance, wonder. It felt...unsure.
The use of the elipses at the end leaves us wondering. Does the author know what hides behind them? What does the something represent? Or is the author in the process of telling us something, then forgetting, or deciding against it? Will we ever know?
Originally I was posting pure HTML Code but it wasn't working so I gave up and did this.
BOOM *appears in a dramatic flash of smoke*
OMG it's sheer poetry! You just made me cry there when you said "Something..." I swear, one of the most beautiful things I've ever read in my life! You need to enter this in a contest or something because I can't even find it in myself, to nitpick, I'm so excited.
*sarcasm*.
Yeah, no I don't get it. But there's a high-volume alert in the Green Room so...
Keep writing!
-ladcat13
Originally I was posting pure HTML Code but it wasn't working so I gave up and did this.