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Re: What is Love?
Hello! Retro here for a review! And it seems your incredibly new so I shall wish you a hearty hello on behalf of our little community! First i'll do a ...
May 23, 2014 -
Re: the apostle
Hello! Retro here for a review. I'll do some nitpicks then mention what I like, okay? :) First thing I want to mention is that it is one long sentence. ...
May 23, 2014 -
Re: Kill your darlings
Hey, Retro here for a review! and how good is "Kill your Darlings"? I loved it! anyway onto my review! The general spelling mistakes Magpie has pointed out so I ...
May 23, 2014 -
Re: A letter from my grandfather
Hallo, Retro here for a review :) As I do in all my reviews I shall do the nitpicks first before talk about what I liked, okay? :) 'Son, I ...
May 20, 2014 -
Re: you read too many books while i read the pages of your skin
Hallo, 'tis Retro here for a review! Well I most certainly had to review this! I'll make some general comments and then delve into what I loved! Every stanza is ...
May 20, 2014 -
Re: Birds of a Feather
Hallo! Retro is here as promised :) I shall do some nitpicks before talking about what I liked, okay? First off I just want to mention the rhyme scheme. This ...
May 15, 2014 -
Re: Torment
Hey! Retro here for a review! I will do some nitpicks before talking about what I liked (including subject matter) 'spiders web of veins' now I'm not 100% sure here ...
May 14, 2014 -
Re: Unanticipated
Hey! Retro here for a review! :D First I'll do some nitpicks then talk about what I like, okay? :) ' Like a mushroom, You suddenly appear. ' This might ...
May 12, 2014 -
Re: Girl Of Imagination
Hallo! 'Tis I, Lord Retro, for a review! First off I'll do some nitpicks then talk about what I liked, okay? :) You start every stanza with 'I use to ...
May 11, 2014 -
Re: At Winter Quay. A Doctor Who Poem.
OH GOD THE PONDS!!!!!! Well hey, Retro here and I shall review whilst crying in intervals. There aren't any major nitpicks with the piece i'd just like more :) You ...
May 11, 2014 -
Re: Secret Garden
Hey Retro here for a review! I'll do some nitpick sort of things, then talk about what I liked, okay? :) Right first thing I want to discuss is your ...
May 11, 2014 -
Re: A poem for Mother's Day
Hey Retro here, I quite like this poem, it feels like something that would appear on a greetings card so kudos for that!!! However, this is a review so unfortuentlyit ...
May 10, 2014 -
Re: we live in cardboard houses
Hallo! Retro here for a review :3 Well I say review more of a comendation. This is superb and beautiful and love every aspect of it. This is frankly one ...
May 8, 2014 -
Re: T*** Patrol
Hello, Retro here for a review as requested. First, i'll do nitpicks then i'll talk about what I liked, okay? :) My literal only nit pick is that I think ...
May 7, 2014 -
Re: anti--
Hello, Retro here for a review as requested! First off i'll do some nitpicks then talk about what I like, okay? The first thing I will mention is the style. ...
May 7, 2014