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Hello!!!! Retro here to do a review. First I'll talk about mistakes and suggestion (a few nitpicks is all), then I'll talk about what I like, okay? :) First thing, ...

Hello Retro here for a review! First off i'll do some nitpicks, then talk about what i liked, okay? My first nitpick, and really this is a surface thing, but ...

Hello, Retro here! I'm sort of going to do a commentary of my ideas to start with because i feel as though i need to maybe constructively advice here. But ...

Hallo! Retro here! First i'll do one or two nitpicks then talk about what i liked, okay? :) "Throw it on the ground, as small bundle of mess, it is." ...

Hello Moon, Retro here! First i'll do some nitpicks and then talk about what i liked, okay? :) okay the first think i'm going to say is write because instead ...

Hey there, Retro here for a review. I will do a few nitpicks then talk about what I liked, okay? Okay, for a poem this length and you keep the ...

Hello my dear, Retro here to do a little review. As was my usual style I shall do I a few nitpics then talk about what I afored. Now my ...

Hey retro here to do a little review. First im going to do a little bit of nitpicks if you will, then talk about what I like. Okay? Well I ...

Hey retro here! And if you're rusty it doesn't really show at all! You've got some great stuff in this poem With some incredibly powerful imagery, so kudos. My only, ...

Hey! I just really wanted to say how fantastic this is! I love the simplicity of the protagonist and I think you create this voice well; and due to the ...

Hola! Retro here for a wee review! II'll do some suggestions, because nitpicks don't actually exist here, then talk about what I thought worked well, okay? :) The thing is ...

Hallo! Retro here! First i'll do some nitpicky sort of things then talk about what I liked, okay? 'I belong to Hamilton. - Kirkfieldbank and Hamilton,' I personally feel as ...

Hallo! Retro here! I'll do nitpicks then talk about what I like, okay? :) Now there isn't much to go on...You've made a list, and some imagery but there is ...

Hello! Retro here for a little review! Okay, first I do nitpicks, then talk about what I liked, okay? Now this might just be me, but I don't like the ...

Hello! Retro here for a review. I'll do some nitpicks then talk about what I liked, okay? :) You have a lot of sort of repetition in your piece, which ...