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The saga continues! Firstly, the issue with the kit surviving on his own in leafbare has been covered. Yes! More questions were indeed raised about Forest, but nothing that doesn't ...

Warriors fanfiction? I am here to review this alright! Please also note that you said in the description for this work that you wanted a harsher review, so... here you ...

'Simple Attraction' is a simple poem that uses simple repetition to express a simple emotion. The repetition of the last three lines in both the first and second stanza is ...

This piece is an accurate, well-written narrative version of the poem it is based off of. I like the way your described the goblins; they do manage to feel animalistic ...

The best thing about this, I think, is the way each of the catastrophes are described. The strongest lines are the ones where the background details are the focus. The ...

This poetry reads like song lyrics. It fact, it might be better categorized as such. Last line of stanza one - 'refuse *to* take', line four of stanza three, 'carefree', ...

This is a neat and tidy little poem that I'm quite glad as a reader to know the context for. This poem, I feel, is quiet. There are no strong ...

I'm having real flashbacks to my own Dungeons & Dragons session now. (I always play Harkyn.) Maybe the Dragonlance books would be a good point of comparison. This prologue feels ...

This is a fine piece of writing. I will admit to coming into this skeptical. Hearing voices is a common motif for those who don't know what they're doing and ...

Yes. The opening staging is reminiscent of a play, with the setting given as it is. I quite like the feel, for something outside of your main story. Despite the ...

I love the words and wordplay in this poem. More than telling about Valerie, this poem tells about the narrator, whose passion is clearly the written word. And do they ...

This a powerful poem about a serious topic. The author's opinions on the matter come out, strong, hard, and holding nothing back in terms of symbolism. Thank you for bringing ...

You might be pleased to know, Apollo, that Robert's Frost poem was not meant to be an inspirational poem, but rather a rumination on a friend of his that had ...

This story has an interesting premise, but it's distracted from by the block of text formatting. I do truly enjoy the premise of this story - a mysterious window washer? ...

This piece of free verse reads like an upset break-up vent, not so much meant for the target of the narrator's anger than as an outlet. The second and third ...